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    Quote Originally Posted by Vulgar` View Post
    This site should have a poetry section
    Smartellic...... Nice rap, but I half expected something more entertaining.

    Like this,


    A walk through the park
    it was getting dark.
    I saw his fangs
    I ran through the rains
    A chase from a biest
    Should have headed east

    Now out of a shoe
    looking to a Jew
    Thought I could get a way from you.
    Turns out your were right
    put me up tonight
    So we can discuss the fight.

    And if you are to die,
    I will tell them a lie
    so we don't fry
    and may be they won't cry
    for the death of two
    will make the Jew
    A reality for all of you.


    Now, put this to that little beat of your's Vulgar. I really need to stop reading.......and get back to my abstracts.........
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    LCD Dictator display.

    chained a captured captive, staring blankly at their trap;
    the wish for want of sleep, slipping sand through rusted tap.
    their eyes have long glazed over, as their brains they fade away,
    the light that beckons onward, beckons nowhere but to stay.
    to stay in desolation; with faces peeled away;
    emotions aren't listening as night turns into day.
    naked and afraid, there's freedom in the dark;
    to cease to be in the data sea, my monitor now owns me.
    the hours pass more aimless, as I lie in laughter lost;
    if time was money, not even the richest could foot the cost.
    never power down,
    never sleep.
    never move,
    and never speak.
    The sound of raindrops collect below fingertip extensions of the mind,
    to the social networks I've given all- I've signed away my life.
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    LCD Dictator display.

    chained a captured captive, staring blankly at their trap;
    the wish for want of sleep, slipping sand through rusted tap.
    their eyes have long glazed over, as their brains they fade away,
    the light that beckons onward, beckons nowhere but to stay.
    to stay in desolation; with faces peeled away;
    emotions aren't listening as night turns into day.
    naked and afraid, there's freedom in the dark;
    to cease to be in the data sea, my monitor now owns me.
    the hours pass more aimless, as I lie in laughter lost;
    if time was money, not even the richest could foot the cost.
    never power down,
    never sleep.
    never move,
    and never speak.
    The sound of raindrops collect below fingertip extensions of the mind,
    to the social networks I've given all- I've signed away my life.
    Fudge this AWESOME place!!!

    My SKETCHBOOK: please critique! i can take it!

    To limit one's maximum knowledge is to maximize one's limits.

    Sanity is wasted on the boring.
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote

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