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I'm using the "Marvel method" If your not familliar with it, it's an informal page by page break down, for the artist to improvize however they deem necessary. I wanted to play around with the presentation, but let me tell you this took me long enough to layout a handful of pages. So I'm just going to write this off as an excersize. Since I'm the artist on this project, I don't think it's necessary for me to get too fancy with presentation on something the public isn't going to see.
Here is a list of objectives I had
Display a general mood
give an idea of which side of the page, each page will be on.
cram the entire script into one folded page for a submission packet.
intuitive layout?(Not sure if I pulled that one off)
Just came across this...
I'm not sure I grasp the purpose of this (I'm guessing a wrap/folder for other material?), but I have a big big problem with the font choice you went with. It's extremely difficult and confusing to read. Have you tried a less freaky font?
No position or belief, whether religious, political or social, is valid if one has to lie to support it.--Alj Mary
Ironically, the concept of SIMPLICITY is most often misunderstood by simple-minded people. --Alj Mary
The font could be an issue. It's the font I've chosen for narration. I guess I have 26 pages of narration to redesign.
Before I do anything too hastey, check this out and tell me if it's legible to you or not.