good work on your wasted concepts.
I think you need to be more careful with your straight lines.
when copying the bridgeman proportion drawings for example, draw the vertical line first, if its not straight draw it again.
then the horizontal, make sure that they are straight, parallel to each other and check that the spacing is right.
and then draw the rest of the drawing as it relates to those straight lines.
you did a decent job with the perspective construction cars on the previous page and i think if you apply more care to the setup you can get more out of you studies.
keep up the good work
im learning art too and far away from being good, but maybe it helps a bit:
scratchy lines, thats a problem i got myself too, i know its hard to break the habit of drawing that way, especially when you very used to it.
as some guys posted before, you should try to draw cleaner lines and dont do a lot of fuzzy strokes to discribe the form.
your lines will become moe confident in that way because you really have to know where to draw your line.
i know that from myself, at the moment we dont really understand how the line has to be drawn, so we draw a lot of fuzzy strokes to try out, what looks best.
also i would suggest that you use a thicker brush for you lines, at the moment they are very thin and its hard to read the dynamic of the brushstroke in that way. your drawing with pen pressure right?
futhermore it could be helpful to just sketch with value instead of lines (if you like to draw outlines more, keep it.)
colorless its just a point i noticed, a lot of your drawings are a bit pale, maybe draw with higher opactity?
real life studies, i know its a bit boring to draw an apple for example, but it defenitly helps a lot.
last, i would be careful with the use of photos in your drawings. even if it looks good, it doesnt really help your drawing skills.
again, no offensive, just trying to help you.
its easier to find mistakes of others, then fix your own. it would be great if i follow my own advices instead of being lazy... ;D
ah yeah and sorry for my poor english, i hope its understandable.
Last edited by Highland3r; September 11th, 2011 at 06:13 AM.
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