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    Check this one

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    Check this out, its inspired from some other work:

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    Killing machine , the bionic Devil:

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    Beautiful Sunny day to crush nuts.

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    better pay for ur sin when alive, as in hell Hedies goin to burn ur A**

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    Monkey king

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    Hey Aonegamer,
    I see many nice ideas here and really good approaches but IMO you have to concentrate on anatomy now. Read some tutorials on anatomy (example: http://warrenlouw.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d2p3au1) and make simple sketches with pencils to get used to the human body shapes.
    Keep on drawing, looking forward to see more.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Lux_Aeterna View Post
    Hey Aonegamer,
    I see many nice ideas here and really good approaches but IMO you have to concentrate on anatomy now. Read some tutorials on anatomy (example: http://warrenlouw.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d2p3au1) and make simple sketches with pencils to get used to the human body shapes.
    Keep on drawing, looking forward to see more.
    Thank you.
    I am working on anatomy side-wise.
    Cheers

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    Quote Originally Posted by Lux_Aeterna View Post
    Hey Aonegamer,
    I see many nice ideas here and really good approaches but IMO you have to concentrate on anatomy now. Read some tutorials on anatomy (example: http://warrenlouw.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d2p3au1) and make simple sketches with pencils to get used to the human body shapes.
    Keep on drawing, looking forward to see more.
    And wow the above link is supercool and inspirational. Thank you for sharing.

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    Need help

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    Look at insects maybe or even look at medieval armor or samurai. there lots of reference on the web i mean sometimes a pattern for your armor could come from finding a few unique shapes from the objects around ur room. For example, the button layout on your monitor mixed with the pattern on your curtains, or the vent on your house wall. Hope this helps

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    WIP, Still working on improving this.

    And thank you so much Tom Fenton, getting inspired form common things is a good idea. I never thought so.

    Would implement them in next painting.

    Anyone, where i can tweak this further.

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    Here is the final version of The Warrior:
    Any suggestion for this ???

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    Gambit, this is my favorite marvel character next to Spider Man

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    was trying to make some ancient Armour:

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    Samurai Armour, (concentrated on detailing):

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    I think I should continue only Character designs, environmental design are really hard:

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    Lots of work but not much studies? you should try do some and post them

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    Quote Originally Posted by kidult View Post
    Lots of work but not much studies? you should try do some and post them
    I don't understand why all say me to study, when I have said 1000+ times that I do Study , but don't feel like posting it here.
    I Keep sketching (with pencil and paper).

    This all above painting are my study, can U all comment on them , where am I lacking in them ?
    If I would say this is my product, believe me none of you would be able to say a bit of mistake in it.(Once I am a master , till I a'int).

    All this one are my study, Comment where am I lacking in them.
    For example Tell me that the samurai Armour is lacking specularity to be gold. Tell me use hard tone brush for sharp specular , rather than telling you need to study. That does not make sense, where am I wrong ?

    I may sound harsh but believe me u Join a forum full of artist , none of them is able to comment where am I lagging in the painting I make, they instead tell you do some study. What to study , no one tells me?
    They say improve anatomy, they cant say where My character is lagging in anatomy.

    that all for now, please comment only if you wanna comment how I can improve my existing art

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    Now that all you were saying see this n couple of more I would be posting

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    I think you should try to do value studies unless you're already working on it. I think that would help your paintings

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    Quote Originally Posted by ErikR View Post
    I think you should try to do value studies unless you're already working on it. I think that would help your paintings
    Thank you Value studies means , drawing poses??

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    Female anatomy is the most difficult of all anatomy types.

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    One more concept art. paid attention to detailing:

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    Quote Originally Posted by Aonegamer View Post
    I don't understand why all say me to study, when I have said 1000+ times that I do Study , but don't feel like posting it here.
    Hi Aonegamer. I've read through your sketchbook comments and thought I'd reply as it seems as though you really want to improve. Many people are telling you that you need to study anatomy, totally. It's not possible to comment on a stray arm here or a bad hand there - because all of your work hinges on improving your knowledge and observation of the subjects you wish to paint. I really believe this is the message everyone has taken time to reply has for you. You appear to be 'running before you can walk' (that's not meant with any disrespect). By that I mean, if the foundations aren't correct it is impossible to make good by dressing it up with details, specularity or special brushes.

    So, when people offer the advice to study more - it isn't meant as a throw away comment but is actually the only way forward. Get some good reference of what it is you want to portray, then draw it over and over until you are confident. I would really advise finding a life drawing class with a decent tutor - learning the fundamentals will allow you to enjoy Photoshop / painting / drawing a whole lot more.

    Hope that is more the kind of constructive criticism you've asked for?

    ~Slayer

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    Quote Originally Posted by thegrayslayer View Post
    Hi Aonegamer. I've read through your sketchbook comments and thought I'd reply as it seems as though you really want to improve. Many people are telling you that you need to
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    Thank you for your comment. Yeah I am lacking in anatomy and other basic. I am practicing them a lot. And yeah I have seen your sketch book its worthy and awesome.

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    No worries. Posting your progress here will surely help, as I've been around a while and never received an unhelpful piece of feedback. Perhaps rather than thinking of it as 'study', consider what your favourite subject is; research it then draw it many times from reference. Consider which artists are your favourite - I used to copy my favourites to death, as I loved their work so much. Take from my advice what you will, that's just the way I learned...

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    One more concept art:

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