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Ok, this is time number three: I keep hiding in a hole and then come back to CA a year later (which is pretty ungracious, really).
Howdy! I'm a 21-year-old university student, so I'm a bit unfocused. A friend recently reminded me of how much I like illustration, so now I'm working on that again. No classes regarding illustration, though, so I absorb from other folks on the internet.
Any feedback is appreciated, as usual: critiques, redlining, diatribes, anecdotes, life stories, etc. Thanks for looking!
Last edited by Nuked Tofu; July 18th, 2012 at 08:44 PM. Reason: three-year update
As the title says, current WIPs and other things, including a plague doctor or two.
The first painting is a bit of a headache. The left side's the "blah" first pass, and the right side is the current "oh geeze what the hell" state. It got out of hand because a professor suggested to "think Gustav Klimt". Didn't really understand what he meant then, and obviously don't still... a bedazzled bird might be a little bit too much.
Um, I'm gonna try to fix that. (Help??) Over 'n' out!
Last edited by Nuked Tofu; July 11th, 2011 at 11:55 AM.
Hey! I've noticed on your digital works, your finished pieces tend to have a lot of obvious "brush" strokes and small, scratchy lines left that aren't quite necessary. I think that if you take the time to start with larger brushes/forms first and only use smaller brushes for the details, it could help you to have a more finished/polished look.
Cleaning up of previous sketch. Neck looks a bit small, and he looks very plastic. Something to work on.
I was gonna do some speedpaints of foreign subjects like the outside world, full bodies, and full bodies in the outside world. But now I'm a bit tired. Hmm dmm
Last edited by Nuked Tofu; July 11th, 2011 at 03:30 AM. Reason: addendum
Good stuff! I actually don't mind the brushy lines on that head; they generally follow the planes of the face, and bring out the form a bit. (Okay, maybe a bigger brush would have looked nicer, but the actual lines look nice.) The gold and blue head does look a bit choppy, though. =) I really like the piece in your first post, it's got a great sense of mood and I love the texture.
Looks like the start of something beautiful!
@Tides - Oh, you flatter me. Thanks!
Realized the other day that I am clueless regarding the anatomy of the face. Starting from the bones up, though a real model'd be nice. Ref photo from jimiyo.com--really high-res.
Hmm, things could be a bit rounder, chin's a bit off, and teeth. Hmm dmm
Okay, one year later. I've gotta stop being a bad community member...
Anyway, easing back into illustrations and stuff. Working on contrast and information in the illustration, as well as making backgrounds less vague. hm...
Thanks for looking!
Last edited by Nuked Tofu; July 18th, 2012 at 09:05 PM. Reason: Image resize preserved hard edges...
A finished portrait (from photo), and some sketchbook stuff from the past few months... should scan more life drawings
Thanks for looking!
Last edited by Nuked Tofu; July 20th, 2012 at 11:48 PM. Reason: hard-edged saved again...
This is one of those moments when I realize how little I know, and what my art education has and lacks (has: free expression; lacks: technical instruction). I think I'm doing this right?
I feel in over my head, but I'm determined to figure this out...
via some monster girl meme on tumblr, I've been attempting to whip up daily illustrations to practice composition, design, value range, story, etc... Um, it's not going very well. First one is flat, second one is dark and mucky and vague. Hopefully I'll get better with more practice..
EDIT: okay I edited the centaur one a little, I couldn't stand it.
Last edited by Nuked Tofu; August 7th, 2012 at 03:13 AM. Reason: revision
I like that skull study, somehow your painting looks more like a real skull then the reference. Maybe it's the texture from your brush strokes as apposed to the plastic appearance of the ref'.
My Sketchbook Feel free to drop in and offer advice
Here i took one of your pieces to offer some feedback and info for you to play with in your future pieces.
The text is not well formed but i hope it helps you somehow
keep up the good work, everything is improving definitely that way.
i wanna mention that i like the composition and the potential of the piece is great.
(If you have no problem, i could post it also in my sketchbook for other mates to see and take some info from this one )
I love your art! Especially the skull and bird guy. Great work!