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    Succubus

    Hi community, my first post here

    This is a picture of a Succubus I just drew.

    It's one of my first pics I really like a bit.
    Hope u enjoy it, and please give me suggestions to make it better.

    Succubus

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    It's nice but the pose seems a bit stiff, and the finger proportions are quite right.
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    hey boobs are wrong
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    Welcome!

    I hope you find here what you are looking for.

    The succubus (from top to bottom):
    her right hand is the same size as her left, but it should be larger if it is coming out at us. Her breasts are odd; I've never met a girl with that small of nipples. While I appreciate your modesty in putting her in panties, they are flat -- look like they are on top of her instead of on her, and I don't think she needs them (succubi descend upon men to have sex with them while they sleep -- which I'm sure you knew)

    Anyway, don't feel discouraged:
    you tried an interesting pose, tackled wings, AND most importantly foreshortening!

    Thanks for posting!
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