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    Hey folks.

    Just added my gallery after being a viewer on CA for a year and a half (wanted to show things I actually thought were half decent!)

    I'm entering my 2nd year at University in September, studying Illustration.

    Any feedback / comments are welcome however damning! (Try to be a wee bit constructive though!!).

    My Gallery so far

    Many thanks!
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    Pretty good. some are just a little heavy on the black. try a few more tones before going right into the black.
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    Everything is too dark, and you rely on bold strokes too much. It all is relatively flat as well, but you can only get gooder. Yea!
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    Thumbs up Comments so far!

    You are of course both completely correct! I find myself getting bored with an image quickly and chuck a sheet of dark down to get it finished. It's a crappy habit and I'm very aware of it.

    Thanks for taking the time to look and comment

    Here's to the next stage of my development!

    Joe
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