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July 3rd, 2011 #1
Input determines Output: Time to Buckle Down
Last edited by Trishlish; August 5th, 2012 at 04:23 AM.
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Off to a solid start and I know I can't wait to see more from you already!
Just one thing: the girl's hair is bothering me. It kind of looks like it doesn't really attach to her head
July 3rd, 2011 #3
Thank you muchly Her hair bugs me aswell, it's too neat. And floats, as you mentioned.
July 6th, 2011 #4
July 22nd, 2011 #5
Oh, I love that character in your first post! It makes me laugh. He looks curmudgeonly, yet good-natured.
I also like those small sketches in your last post, you seem to have a good feeling for colour.
Keep it up!
November 4th, 2011 #6
You have nice contours. I think you see shapes very nicely. Some of the drawings feel "flat", which comes from the way your lines always carry the same "weight". I think you could gain more from pushing lead REAL hard into areas of your figure that you are confident of. The "stiffness" you mention comes from not having a flowy gesture. When I do see your gesture lines they look too clean and symmetric. Whereas I was always taught gestures represent asymmetry and action (A&A). Just let your mind go during the gesture phase and release all inhibition. You can always fix proportions afterwards.
Anyhow, I hope none of my advice came off as condescending. I don't mean to be. I couldn't help but notice you are untrained, like I am/was, and also work at an (cardio) office. I hope you continue to work real hard, and keep pushing yourself to do crazier things in art!
July 10th, 2012 #7
Not at all Panda, I value your input! Thank you! I'm still working on those gestures!
I'm sad to see I've been gone so long! Again.
Here we go.
Last edited by Trishlish; August 5th, 2012 at 04:29 AM.
July 11th, 2012 #8
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August 9th, 2012 #9
LePush - Thanks so much, will do! Or try to do!
The first is as finished as it will ever be; the second I want to finish it asap so I can focus on more important things. I'm not sure how to fix his legs and what not.
Both were, stupidly, done from imagination.
The last portraits are of myself from life via mirror. First time working from life, eek.
I'm all for critique
Last edited by Trishlish; August 10th, 2012 at 12:15 AM.
August 9th, 2012 #10
Nice stuff. Your colors are nice and clean and you have some great shading. I don't really have any tips, keep it up!
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Wow, nice life studies! I like the presence of motion in the poses sketches! Keep up the good work!
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