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    Spy in Bogart Style final version

    Today i finished my pencil drawing, I presented before in the "WORK IN PROGRESS & HELP" forum, but now since it's finished, I also want to show the final version here.
    I would be really thankful for critics and tipps, how and what I should train in the future.

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    Cool cool

    Nice! Just a little suggestion, but maybe you should accentuate the lips less, I dont' know.

    Keep going!
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    Ine, ge zijt een keun.. xxx
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    good job, i agree with slayer about the lips.
    I also think that the shading is a bit off, you have either very dark tones or no shading at all. I think it might be a good idea to try and distribute the shading more around the entire piece, so you have some midtones aswell in order to define the shapes more. His Suitcare looks especially flat in thi regard.

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    Originally posted by zeroe
    good job, i agree with slayer about the lips.
    I also think that the shading is a bit off, you have either very dark tones or no shading at all. I think it might be a good idea to try and distribute the shading more around the entire piece, so you have some midtones aswell in order to define the shapes more. His Suitcare looks especially flat in thi regard.
    But I didn't say anything about the lips
    Actually there were some midtones in the face, but they seemed where kind of lost, because of the dark background and while making the picture.
    How could I make the suitcase look better (I will not change it in this actual picture, because I fear to ruin it), but there was the main Problem, that it should be a dark case, but since the background is also very dark, I had to look, that the case wouldn_t get lost in it.
    The middletones on the Trenchcoat (like you can see
    here got lost, while I darkened the whole coat several times).

    By the way, it's good to see, that noone noticed the length of the sleeves of the guy (just couldn't do a good looking hand..)

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