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    Tjena! Tack för posten i min SB . På din senaste så tycker jag att faktumet att hornen på ren-saken och bakgrunden stör varandra lite grand i.o.m att de är parallela, bergen och grenerna, vilket distraherar en från själva figuren och staden.
    Sen så håller jag med de som "hunterkiller_" tog upp att du inte borde ha huvudkaraktären tittandes mot kameran. lycka till!

    Edit; Oh and I just assumed you knew swedish since it says you're from sweden, if you don't then le'mme know and i'll write it again in english .

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    hey m8 i really like your portraits and iam digging the linework on post 91 i so much would like to see my lines become like this cheers!

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    very cool sketchbook, lots of work and very cool concepts

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    Thanks a bunch for that crit on my SB dude. I think I'll crit your last one. Let's go!

    So what you have here is a landscape and a basic profile view of a creature with it's owner. Good stuff. What I think is that the landscape, by itself, is great and has a good view/composition and the character, by itself, is good. When you put them together, though, I don't find that they mesh too well. I don't see any lines that are helping my eyes to move across the page. It's like, Character. Boom. Landscape. Boom. Y'know?

    Dang it! I wish I had my tablet on me I would do some reds over this. I'll update as soon as I can, mate. thanks again for dropping some wisdom on my SB page. SUPER appreciated.

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    Daniel, right on brother. Great point. Tried to fix!

    Ludic, tack själv för input!

    thanks dimi!

    asa, thanks mister!

    EA, thanks for the input! appreciate it! great points too. i´ll try to att more things to make the composition flow!

    here´s the lates version. the girl who stared at the camera dissappeard into a new psd file where she turned into a wes9000 inspired character design
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    Beautiful figure! Ska bli cool att se färdiga illustrationen!

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    cool stuff, really like your designs! keep it up!

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    Right now they're looking straight to the side which makes it feel flat and you wonder what it is they're looking at (judging from the horns the creature is looking slightly towards the foreground which is fine, I don't think they should both look in the exact same direction)

    Very nice sketchbook, can't wait to see how this work and more turn out

    Also me and my gf are trying to learn Swedish, very fun so far Har det bra!

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    thank you Kevin!

    Ian Barker: tack så mycket for the input! much appreciated. i opened up the composition a bit, the idea was that they´re heading out on a great adventure, so i wanted them to look off into the distance, ready to go

    some semi-quick color sketches, would love some input
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    i feel like the guy should be looking into the background or at the building. looking straight at the edge of the painting doesn't give the epic feel. but that's just my opinion

    I think the green one but with some of the reds mixed into the landscape would be good (especially if you keep the creature red, circulate that color), and open up the sky a bit more with atmospheric perspective

    They all look quite nice I think though, and maybe the second two have a more unique feel than the green landscape you would expect. I'm not very helpful right now, lol I do think the second one needs more saturation on the building

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    thanks for the input dude, i appreciate it! maybe i´ll try to change the direction of her head somewhat.

    stuffs!

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    Whoa, internet argument... this is a nice level up for you. The composition is pretty good... and I'm feeling a distinct sense of foreground, mid-ground and background here.

    One thing you may already be working on is knocking back the stuff in the background, with-regards-to the saturation. Atmospheric perspective will make far things seem "duller". While the colors are lighter and softer in the background, they feel a bit too saturated to my eyes.

    But kudos, dude. Great move up in abilities. Nice work!

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