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Thread: Destroy Erase Improve
June 11th, 2011 #1
Destroy Erase Improve
Yoyo, got a bunch of stuff thats in need of crit and or some fresh eyes. Just finished up my senior year at Cornish here in Seattle. My senior project was to collaborate on a game concept using a storyline we came up with as a jumping off point for the visuals. Ill start off by posting that stuff wich is still being worked over for the portfolio. Anyway here it be lemme know whatchu think!
ooh and heres my portfolio site
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Pit city refining
Working more on getting this one finalized, any crit is most appreciated
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June 30th, 2011 #11
The anatomy studies on post #4 are very good, maybe you should do more of then!
keep going : )
June 30th, 2011 #12
Strong start, I like your character designs and environments. You want critiques? Maybe spend longer on anatomy studies and try to improve line quality, really think about the marks you put onto paper and what they suggest/ evoke- sometimes suggestion is better than description. As for faces, make sure the eyes and features are aligned and placed correctly, for example, in the photo study of the guitarist, his eyes are not level.
I think if you included other light sources, such as artificial lights, in your environments you could have a lot of fun and experiment more with where you want the viewers eye to go. Maybe try cell shading to get a feel for values? I think you've over mixed your colours sometimes and they appear muddy.
All the same, like I said before, strong start, just keep going!
June 30th, 2011 #13
Appreciate the crits!
Thank you Henrique and Hunin for the crit and encouraging words. I definitely have an issue with trying to speed through things at times and it comes back to haunt me later. Thanks again, practice time!