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    Girls, girls and one guy..NUDITY! (04/28)

    Here are some of ref. works I have done in the last four days. Images are posted in chronological order.



    More to come

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    i would work on faces if i were you, figures look good though.




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    i concur, and reinstate. your figures are pretty dead on, but your faces look off. these are really nice nonetheless.

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    Thank you. Theese were done mainly to get more confortable with figures, but I have to admit, faces are not my strongest point..

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    I will try to post daily. My goal is to have 50+ nude ref. studies ready untill next wednesday. I have done around 30 allready, but only 15 of them looks decent..

    Did theese tonight, plus three that aren`t worth posting.



    I think that the guys head is a tad too small.


    Work in progress (?) Her deltoid doesn`t look right...Bones aren`t showing...head too small?




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    Did theese tonight. I can see lots of faults allready. Mabye I`ll fix theese later and edit this post...or something..




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    Firstly... NUDITY WARNING !!! :ranting: :cry:
    Secondly, after I hastly scrolled accross your images, you seem to have grasped the basics of anatomy. I really really really encourage you to put down the mags and go do some live modeling sessions. I strongly beleive you're at that point in your art and would profit greatly from it. :chug:

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    Sorry about that. Warning fixed.
    Yeah, the mags should go, but I don`t think that there is any live modelling sessions in the town I live in. I will move out to a bigger town after summer, though, so mabye I will get to do some life drawings when I`m there. Thanks for the encouragement :chug:

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    nice work, I like the rough shading a lot, a small crit about the last one though, the line of her neck makes it look like her head's on backwards.

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    Thank you, young paddy1. The shading looks rough, mainly becouse of the paper, but I also try to keep it as simple and effective as possible. I am aware of the neck. I reacted the same way the first time I saw the picture. She is looking in the mirror, though, so combined with the mirrored girl, things look a little less odd. Mabye I will add this tomorrow...we`ll see

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    I like your sketching style. You have a good sense for silhouette.

    I agree you should get some live models if you can. Why not do a series of self portraits, and studies of your own hands and feet?

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    Ok mate heres the c+c i promised. From the top

    #1 Right off the bat its clear you are using either FHM or porno for ref. It goes part the way to explaining why all the girls' breasts look like stuck on basketballs. Actually i like the first one. Its simple, its gestural, its fairly accurate.

    #2 her left forearm is too short, her right leg collapses in a little too far at the bottom, and her right side of her chest is a little bit flat,

    #3 Her head is too small, her eyes are too small (i notice this in a lot of your stuff). Her hand is a little small also.

    #4 i like this one excepte for the "just add water" boobs. Youve grasped the shoulder area well.

    #5 Im starting to see an emerging biafran starving lady theme...chuck some meat on these honeys. Use of lineweight is nice too. Oh and she has no face

    #6 i) Good grasp of volumetrics
    ii) No complaints
    iii) There is no counter balance in the upper torso. Thus she seems to be falling. Her shoulders by rights should be sloping down to the left, and her torso on the right side (her right) under the breast would start to fold back to our left.

    #7

    Yeh you hit it right on - eat bitch. Forearm too short again, careful that your centerline (forget the terms) follows the form of the ribcage. That vagina is very phallic - get that looked at

    #8 (11) wtf??

    I dunno how your numbering these ill just go sequentially as i see em. Go the amputated face. Fairly good rendering, anatomy is nice.

    #9 her ribcage is too low and dominating. Add faces more. The muscles in the abdomen area are inconsistant - think about how they are pushed and pulled around the ribcage.

    #10 top clavicle nice.
    bottom boobs low (and dont look saggy)

    #11 basketball boobs. no more porno. rendering makes her look chrome. good anat.

    #12 right boobs are wonky, again foreram (closest) too short.
    bottom: nice foreshortening. problems around the hib-ribcage tranistion

    #13

    nice render. are you addicted to porn?

    #14 Pectorals are flat, as is stomach area. Lower forearm over-defined.

    #15 shade yer nipplez. clavicle dips a lil too much imo. maybe not.

    #16 nc

    #17 hands - nice i like
    right - her right boob is wonk i think you noticed that. remember counterbalance of your hip/shoulder lines.
    Bottom left. nice render. face could do with refining around nose and eyes.

    #18 Head is flat and squareish. jaw too pronounced. NIce stomach. Pelvic muscles too pronounced for femal figure.

    peace

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