On a more critique-oriented note, I agree with what Vertical points out in the paintover about the shape of the chest and alignment of the sternum. Aside from that, her right arm is looking a little off--the elbow needs to go back a little further, and I think it could use some definition of the bone in the elbow. Also, you might want to double-check the shape of the forearm--it seems a little warped.
That said, I really enjoy the lighting on this piece so far--you've established a really awesome sense of soft, ambient light and your shadows are looking great, too
Last edited by Meps; January 27th, 2012 at 12:14 PM.