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    Antideluvian P4

    Feedback welcome. This is the 4'th page in a pitch I am working on about Atlantis, Planet X, and Ancient Astronauts.


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    Hey there.
    Nice work man. The most immediate crit which springs to mind is watch you line weights. The figures in the foreground could stand to be beefed up a bit. Also, the overall page could use a bit more spot blacks to flesh it out. Lastly, the lady on the floor is creating some bothersome tangents with the overlapping panel. Hopefully some of that helps.
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    Thanks, new artwork every week! I do tend to feather a lot.
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