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Nice work man. The most immediate crit which springs to mind is watch you line weights. The figures in the foreground could stand to be beefed up a bit. Also, the overall page could use a bit more spot blacks to flesh it out. Lastly, the lady on the floor is creating some bothersome tangents with the overlapping panel. Hopefully some of that helps.
Thanks, new artwork every week! I do tend to feather a lot.