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    Warrior tribe C&C please??

    Hi guys well im so far, any critics n tips are welcome

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    wait a second, the picture earlier was different. could you add the old one again instead of replacing it? that would be helpful for critiquing the progress.
    also, could you post your references?

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    Quote Originally Posted by LordLouis View Post
    wait a second, the picture earlier was different. could you add the old one again instead of replacing it? that would be helpful for critiquing the progress.
    also, could you post your references?
    yes your right I changed it well because nobody replyed so I went on and changed it , No sorry I dont have the old one? but you can critic this one?

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    His left (right to the viewer) leg looks a little stiff. Try fixing that, also, the shield looks like an egg, maybe give it a better angle, so the shield follows the arm like that http://ps2media.gamespy.com/ps2/imag...7044807721.jpg
    As this is a quite early stage, I believe you will make more details on the shield later, otherwise my suggestion is, do that ^^

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    watch the crown helmet thing, the two sides look a little uneven
    and im not too clear on how those leg pieces (im assuming its armor) are attached to the rest of the characcter

    other than that, its an interesting concept youve got interesting and ornate details here and there ive never been too good with those kind of details

    i think its good to leave old stuff up so ppl can see your progress
    keep at it ^^

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    Quote Originally Posted by eptigo View Post
    watch the crown helmet thing, the two sides look a little uneven
    and im not too clear on how those leg pieces (im assuming its armor) are attached to the rest of the characcter

    other than that, its an interesting concept youve got interesting and ornate details here and there ive never been too good with those kind of details

    i think its good to leave old stuff up so ppl can see your progress
    keep at it ^^
    yeah your right thanks!! well im this is how far I am now the original size is 2000 by 3500 pixels, C&C are welcome??

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    First of all, don't change the image in your first post. Post each new version in a different post and leave them. That way everybody can see where you started and where you are now, what has been changed, etc.

    The lighting is fatally flawed here. You need to do some studies and learn how to light and render basic solids—box, cylinder, sphere. Actually, you need to go back further and learn how to draw those simple solids from any angle and construct everything you see out of them. Then come back to this.

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