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Thread: Warrior tribe C&C please??
May 28th, 2011 #1
Warrior tribe C&C please??
Hi guys well im so far, any critics n tips are welcome
Last edited by Danarart; June 5th, 2011 at 05:00 AM.
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wait a second, the picture earlier was different. could you add the old one again instead of replacing it? that would be helpful for critiquing the progress.
also, could you post your references?
May 28th, 2011 #3
May 28th, 2011 #4
His left (right to the viewer) leg looks a little stiff. Try fixing that, also, the shield looks like an egg, maybe give it a better angle, so the shield follows the arm like that http://ps2media.gamespy.com/ps2/imag...7044807721.jpg
As this is a quite early stage, I believe you will make more details on the shield later, otherwise my suggestion is, do that ^^
June 1st, 2011 #5Registered User
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watch the crown helmet thing, the two sides look a little uneven
and im not too clear on how those leg pieces (im assuming its armor) are attached to the rest of the characcter
other than that, its an interesting concept youve got interesting and ornate details here and there ive never been too good with those kind of details
i think its good to leave old stuff up so ppl can see your progress
keep at it ^^
June 3rd, 2011 #6
June 5th, 2011 #7
damnn nobody?? really?
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First of all, don't change the image in your first post. Post each new version in a different post and leave them. That way everybody can see where you started and where you are now, what has been changed, etc.
The lighting is fatally flawed here. You need to do some studies and learn how to light and render basic solids—box, cylinder, sphere. Actually, you need to go back further and learn how to draw those simple solids from any angle and construct everything you see out of them. Then come back to this.