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    WIP Comic book

    Hello. I would like to share with all you folks some of my W.I P. drawings.
    Here you can see few concept art for comic book that I am working on.
    And also 2 pages done in pencil. I will do inking after...
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    I really like your style and detail. You need to work a little on your fight poses so the motion is believable. Like in panel 4, where the hands are ridiculously large, or panel 2 where the guy has a limp wrist after having punched someone.

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    Gorgeous style, the main character here sort of reminds me of the guy from Natural Born Killers. Your faces/expressions in particular are fantastic.

    My only comments would be on the fight panels and the first panel of the last page:

    -The panel where the protagonist is punching the thug/punk guy in the head doesn't have much "action" to it - it sort of looks like he's giving the guy a noogie, or something.

    -The foreshortening/perspective in the panel where the gun is towards the viewer seems a little rough. The front of the gun and the character don't quite look like they're on correct planes.

    Otherwise, I'm gobsmacked. This is awesome!

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    Thanks for your comments, and for an advice. It is work in progress, so every critic is welcome. Thanks again.

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    Thanks Mirana. I appreciate your advice. I also checked your site mirana's mythology and I like your work.

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    Ditto what's been said. Bad ass style. lol Don't really have anything to contribute in terms of critique. The word that came to mind when I clicked on this thread was "stylish". Great work man..

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    maybe a little too influenced by Ranxerox...

    ...got to watch the influences!


    but I really like the page with the crow

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