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    forest encounter

    something that I've been working on for a while. it's come a long ways. any crit would be awesome.

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    The main girl seems very top heavy. Her head/face seem too wide and her shoulder to hip ration seems off. She's basically a big V which is doing odd things with perspective since the viewer isn't at a high enough vantage to give that effect IMO.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Truepinkas View Post
    The main girl seems very top heavy. Her head/face seem too wide and her shoulder to hip ration seems off. She's basically a big V which is doing odd things with perspective since the viewer isn't at a high enough vantage to give that effect IMO.
    thanks, I think part of the reason for this is that I have the visible leg way too shadowed so her legs look really thin. I'll post an update in a bit.

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    Her gesture is stiff, her arm proportions aren't right (the upper arm should be longer than the lower arm without the hand), her right elbow is weird shaped. Her right knee needs more attention, I know it's a wip but it comes even into the way of seeing her gesture I think...
    Her horns aren't at symmetrical places, her right one should be more forward, I think.

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