Oh that's cool I remember reading Miwa Shirow's Dogs manga back in the day, but I forgot about it! Thanks for reminding me. As for the art I like the girl in the 2nd pic, the line weight makes it look better. However the perspective on the 3rd pic is pretty bad and if you want to do comics then you will have to learn. Basically the bridge (or stairs?) the girl and creature are on are angled towards the viewer while the rest of the image is a straight on view. To fix it you would have to find the horizon line which is at the girls eye level the draw the steps going to a vanishing point on that horizon line.
Lots of anime stuff, but at the same time it looks like there some structure to it it.
Only thing I can say is don't draw just pure anime, it can be debilitating. Even ironically if you want to draw comics and manga itself. Vary it up with some life drawings, and realism. Even manga artists (at least the good ones) have knowledge of underlying structure and some traditional art information.
But with that aside it looks good though, the end of post 7 is my favorite.
Pretty amazing improvement, getting less stiff and more structure. Last sketch is lovely, I don't have any crits about it, and dragon from 16# is also nice. Keep working and draw from life because it's doing good for You... Waiting for more updates