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    noob's wontonsoup

    My name is fb,I just started learning painting in my idle time,so i post my works here for your crits and comments.Thank you.
    Here are sketches i made these two days.

    the first landscape is after Rawiii and i tried to follow his style in the next one.
    Then a really quick sketch of x-5 jet plane
    the last one is after a tutorial of master copy

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    These are a good start, I would suggest using a different type of brush to lay out flat base colors. It's will help making the pieces look more solid and less fuzzy. Overall it looks good!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Bunny Dragoon View Post
    These are a good start, I would suggest using a different type of brush to lay out flat base colors. It's will help making the pieces look more solid and less fuzzy. Overall it looks good!
    thanks for advices,but could u tell me how to get the pictures smaller?

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    You can resize in the program, there should be an image tab in the top bar. I'm going by photoshop off the top of my head.

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    first environmental study...still failed to make the objects solid

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    excellent studies and lovely colours, great work, have some stars
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    photo study of acropolis...still badly done..losing patience...

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    Goodness, you're pretty darned good with painting for a "newbie". Love the environmental study.
    Don't lose patience! I really want to see more.

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    cast drawing wip

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    Hey Fishbed!

    As a beginner painter myself, I find these paintings pretty good.

    I might not be an expert but for a first environmental study, that is looking pretty good.
    Just keep doing what you do!

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    another Photo environmental study WIP..
    its so difficult to draw in a 13inch screen...and i failed to link my laptop to a desktop led monitor

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    i think i know where the rub is..i was always using lower opacity to distinguish different tones which makes the picture blurry.
    Is the right thing i should do is to draw with a low flow rate and distinguish the tones with different count of brushstrokes added?

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    A beginner? These are looking good.
    I wonder what your drawings look like!

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    levitan master copy WIP
    the tone is totally weird *_*

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    Very lovely colors and brushstrokes here and there, I like
    Do you also draw/paint traditionally? It would greatly improve your digital work I think!

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    @ dimi @soleil summer @jorvaa @chiboboh :thanks for compliments!I would do more excercise if I could
    @Elpollo:I had some experience in traditional drawing,but totally new to painting(in any medium),i decided to take the most convenient way(digital) to train myself due to limited conditions

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    life study..sucks

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    new enviro

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    sargent copy in progress

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    one hour cast study

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    movie scene

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    i like the somehow whimsical energy in the roughness of your paintings (does that make sense lol)

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    love this



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    Bouguereau study

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    hi,

    while painting try block base colours more, use brushes set on 100% opacity, mark shapes, then smooth surface

    i hope it will help

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    bouguereau and van dyke study

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