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    Great studies you have going here! For that hand I'd recommend a little more red in the finger tips. Blood shows through on places like fingertips so they're just slightly more red usually. Also, maybe a little more contrast, darker darks and a couple highlighted spots to show the form. Great colors though. You definitely have a good eye for color being a traditional painter.
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    Just a sketch of a plant in the front room

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    Nice progress, I can see you like painting so this crit is focused on that area: it might be good to include a background in more of your work (keeping it simple and not busy) and then try to integrate it into the main object you're painting. Watch for how the tone shapes integrate in whatever you're painting and their edges. Other than that just keep working on proportion, colour etc.
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    Few pages from my book, random sketches of stuff in class, on the bus, and then a locust in watercolour+ink

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    You seem to be making good progress here. In your paintings, you can get more pleasing results by refining your edges more. A strong solid edge instead of a blurred edge with uncertain brushstrokes will give you a more finished look.
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    Illustrationy looking goat, just messing with colour pallettes, been learning some colour theory, wanted a new avatar

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    30 min drapery study

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    Tried to do a study of a Buddah ornament, today is a bad day.

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    nice ,,, but try to learn more from nature!!!!
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    quick update

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    A digital helmet study from reference, a Piece for a calendar that goes towards charity, A flyer that I designed while on a 2 week work placement at a local nightclub under the art director, and finally some traditional work, a goat study Any crits are VERY appreciated, thanks!

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