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    Spiderman comic

    Spiderman comic (3 pages)
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    The layout looks great. Though I think you could do without the "spider-sense" close up on page 2, and move up the panel showing the random guy. It's kinda distracting right now, poping up like that in the middle of the action. That and maybe show a little more of the environment. I know it's just the layout sketch, but I can't really tell where they are. Is it a sports store?
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    It's taking place in a warehouse somewhere in NYC. I'll fix the 2nd page.
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    The bit that doesn't ring true is the 2nd panel on page 3.
    If you were right there with him in front of you - you'd be hard justified not to kill him - to my mind (my super villain is coming out) - its the classic James Bond death scene.

    If however, he was unconscious and you were caught up on time and he was hard to get to, then I'd believe it (down a few levels in an awkward spot - something that you couldn't just pop across too.)
    You have the space with the size of the panel to accomplish that.
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    spiderman comic update: looks better to me now.
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    Better, but I'm not feeling the drama of the last conversation. I'd try to give electro a gesture that suggests he's angry at the affront to his authority. Starscream it up! His current pose suggests they are totally relaxed and have plenty of time.
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    A little progress so far...
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    Spidey's torso looks too long in your recent update.
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    Yes, I'll fix that.
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    fixed...
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    electro rough sketch
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    finally a little update... this is more of a warm up exercise.
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