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    Sacrificial

    Hey there! It's been a while since I last posted here, but I'd really appreciate some feedback on this painting I've been working on.

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    I started it several months ago, and can only work on it now and then between work -- but now when I look at it I just feel at a loss. I know there are tons of issues to work through, I'm just so tired of looking at it that it's hard to know where to start, and I could really use a fresh pair of eyes.

    Any and all feedback is greatly appreciated. c:

    Thanks!

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    I'm not sure you've got your weight right.
    If she's nailed to the tree, well it depends on the angle of the tree how she's going to hang.
    She looks far to comfortable - like a reclining nude.
    She's going to hang straight armed from those nails - unless the tree is leaning back, but then she'll be stretched out more if it was.
    Anyway have a look at my quick PO to see what I'm waffling on about.

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    Ah, thank you so much! I see exactly what you mean. Now that I see it, the weight problem seems awfully glaring. c: That will definitely give me something to work on.

    Thanks again!

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