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    Quote Originally Posted by Amara91 View Post
    Hey spiritvanished. I don't know if you're still working on this or not, but from my observations in this thread, the changes you've made seem to be masking the true issues in this piece. The main problems I see are in the figure--the most glaring to me are in her shoulder and neck region. The connection between her clavicle and shoulder seem slightly off. Also, you may want to research the major muscle in the neck--the sternomastoid(look it up). Lastly, researching the trapezius muscle could help you get a better grip on drawing her shoulders.

    It looks like you're reluctant to scrap your work so far--I'm not saying that you should. But redrawing the concept and getting things right in the preliminary drawing stages may pay off later.
    Hello amara!
    I wish I had read this a few hours earlier.
    ahaha.
    i essentially scrapped my last ref, and looked for a whole new one.
    drew over the body, and merged the two .

    i got too attached to some things in the image. :/ but im sucking it up and being a woman. aha.

    thank you for the crits!
    im doing more research for the shoulder/collarbone, but im not well versed in anatomy, and am having trouble finding a picture from a similar angle.
    but im still looking!
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    Almost finishedddd Knocking out another realism piece.
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    hey there nice job with the color scheme and the hair i really like the texture around that area
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