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    Lightbulb Wasp fighter

    A concept for a low weight air-to-air combat vehicle. Need your opinion in terms of composition and overall sketch. Anything to add/remove? Any elements fighting for focal point. I'd like to keep the engines as the main focus, they would also be the light source in this case.

    Any help would be appreciated!

    Thanks.

    Alexei.

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    The problems all stem from a basic failure of perspective.
    You're not displaying any scene so theres no composition to worry about - it's just a vehicle shot.

    Think of it within a cube - search out some perspective grids, that should help you out lots, in fact use this one:
    http://freddieart.com/QuickTools/ind...d=1&category=2

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    Thanks a lot! You're the 2nd person who pointed the perspective as an issue, so now I know I have to work on it.

    And the perspective tool is just a godsend - thank you! I love perspective but the set up is just painstaking sometimes.

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