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    Quote Originally Posted by TinyBird View Post
    Well, my problem with it is more that it doesn't look like a blend of realism and anime, but rather that she has malformed, sunken chin, like this:
    Currently working on.  Please critique!
    So you'll have to pay lots of attention into shading it properly to get away from that look with that lineart.
    As for "make that clear be keeping it rough", in here it's sometimes impossible to know what is and what is not the extent of one's abilities because lots people with different levels of skill post here, so if you want to keep something clear, it might be better to just write it to your post from the start.
    oh i didnt mean to say that the wonky chin is my "style" thats the biggest copout an artist can use, i was just trying to give you an idea of what i wanted. mostly in the arms.
    i cant really explain it, but the redline creates a fuller, more toned, average girl with a bit of muscle. I intended to keep the girls slim, little to no muscle.
    i dont really want to change that.
    it does look weird i know, but i feel like the neck chin will look normal with shading, color, and light.
    i have no problems with murdering my darlings and changing the chin if in the end it is too weird.
    i no means intend to discredit you, we just have differentiating opinions, and i respect yours.

    Thank you though! advice like yours is why i post here honest critique from people with different styles. <:


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    Currently working on.  Please critique!
    okay massive update.
    i suppose.
    STILL NEEDS HELP.
    searching for more interesting windows.
    its not going to be b&w just working out values, and light sources.
    working hard to create movement.
    suggestions?

    also sloppy lines, are repsentational ,and meant to merely map out.
    the final probably wont even have lines.
    Last edited by spiritvanished; March 25th, 2011 at 04:15 AM. Reason: typo

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    Currently working on.  Please critique!
    w/o lines

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    Currently working on.  Please critique!
    with lines.

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    Giving my two cents about that arm and hand.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ohm View Post
    Giving my two cents about that arm and hand.
    ah thank you for the input,
    C:
    ill keep it in mind.

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