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    Cat By The Stream

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    Howdy all,

    The light source in this scene is supposed to be a sort-of flashlight coming from the front with some feint fill light in the scene.

    Any C&C greatly appreciated.

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    Even though it is a very naive style, I think the figure would benefit from a modelling pass to create a sense of form. A little anatomy ref wouldn't go astray either.

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    Modeling Pass Complete hehe

    ...don't worry i'm just joking of course ..or am I!? hmmm

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    Heheh... that's kinda what I thought when I saw the first picture... it looks like a clay statue. I, too would suggest looking at some feline anatomy to give some definition to the form. Also, the picture is very middlevalue/grey now, so some contrast wouldn't hurt. I like the grumpyness of the cat though Is there a story behind this image?

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    Some contrast in the background can't hurt. The current one looks rather like a theatrical backdrop - flat. Give it some depth.

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