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January 4th, 2012 #27Registered User
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Hey Spirited! Good stuff you got going on here. I hope you update this more with some recent improvements! I am positive you have and I am still lawding over you being only 18/19.
I am going to have to add on with what was mentioned earlier - try to get more complimentary colors in it!!! You have the foundations to a pinpoint but expand! I am hoping this isn't coming across as DBaggery but honestly, the best thing for you to do is probably start doing painting in real life, it will increase your speed and efficiency with colors in digital dramatically!
Also some male anatomy would show that you have depth with understanding the human body (which I bet you can) as opposed to just women which....I don't mind
Lastly - I love your compositions but some seem like studies with references as opposed to individual concept...I am really keen on seeing what you can do with your own creating, that is, unless you already are doing this.
Anyways I hope I am not coming across as a jerk with my critique as I am amazed at your ability whilst still being a teenager. Just try chugging out some traditional art like that of your Morrigan but then some. I sadly am the opposite with my sketchbook as I only have speed sketches but I am sure that you are going to wind up on the right path and go far places in the end.
Can't wait for more! Cheers!
Striving to be the best that is possible before I conk into the grave.
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March 8th, 2012 #28
March 9th, 2012 #29
update on pieces posted here, and some newer things.
March 9th, 2012 #30
Awesome sketchbook, good job there. Although I'd like to see some of those wips/sketches as finished pieces
http://www.conceptart.org/showthread.php?t=267414 - c&c welcome
March 10th, 2012 #31
Thank you anty! Maybe!
half finished "study" i say it in quotes because the original had full black, and its a big no no. I really like this though.
also drawing a few sketches of man muscles. omg. so hard.
Last edited by spiritvanished; March 10th, 2012 at 01:43 PM.
March 15th, 2012 #32
just an idea i had walking around campus, and i saw this really awesome picture of an old bicycle.
but ugh, this really sucks.
also its no where near this saturated in photoshop, or when i look at it outside of the internet.
&omg, this stage sucks so hard. no style, no execution, no grasp of proper anatomy. wish i had started/known about studies earlier in life
just reached my one year of tablet ownership tho. thats cool.
-used a grid for this
im working on about ehh, fifteen sketches so far, but i cannot figure out why they refuse to upload.
March 20th, 2012 #33
The last figure you posted is very nice. You really painted her anatomy beautifully.
March 22nd, 2012 #34
i like it too, it just missing something.
an hour long study from yesterday. it was really hard i only used a three line grid. I'm terrible with proportions unless i spend hours.
tomorrow im scanning my head studies from loomis. and god they suck. but theres a lot and im not giving up!
March 27th, 2012 #35
1 hr ish.
1 hour about.
just something cute with interesting lighting.
March 27th, 2012 #36
fine body study.
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May 1st, 2012 #37
huge update. almost done.
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May 2nd, 2012 #39