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    I'll work my hardest to improve!

    Hello everybody!
    My name is Shernise! im nineteen~, and I want to be a professional illustrator.
    I have a love for the Asian approach to fashion, and beauty.
    I'm also in an art collective with other artists of different mediums, producers, poets, musicians etc. etc. Currently pushing out study after study!
    I'll be studying in Japan next year!
    first post here, not quite sure what to expect, but i was getting a little fed up with DA, and was told I could get well rounded constructive criticism.

    <: so here I am.

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    Hello kitty. america.

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    One of the thread said not to upload as an img?
    but how do i attach?

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    help?

    i figured out how to upload but all my files keep failing?

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    I'll work my hardest to improve!
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    Hello there! Nice start you have indeed! Loving the colours in your last post. Keep going! Show us some studies too!

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    niiiiice
    cant wait to see more, you rock

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    thank you!
    I've been taking more art classes so ill have more anatomy and still life to show soon!
    (:
    thank you for the support!

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    I'll work my hardest to improve!
    added hair.
    suggestions.
    also this is a quick outline of hair. no real detail has been added except some lighting.

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    more works.

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    key from shinee a kpop group.

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    birthday gift for a friend.

    please ignore anatomy on blue girl.
    i dont plan on refining it, because it was just for fun.

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    I'll work my hardest to improve!
    quick sketch.
    color, background etc. will be added.

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    i still haven't recorded any of my sketches yet guys. im sorry, most of them were ruined whilst i was moving out.

    but good news i was recently bombarded with a bunch of paying jobs and prints sells.
    c:
    so ive been trying to study and sketch between jobs but deadlines are approaching. ill post more often.
    uploading more in a moment. photo bucket being slow.

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    finally finally finished the logo mascot image for this shop in town.
    im charging $600. my largest job ever.
    im very happy.

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    finally going to commit more time to sketching just bought the imagine fx anatomy book, and downloaded a lot of the free ones on this site, going to absorb everything.

    i have one tattoo design coming up, and a large large piece for another store, not a logo though, and just was asked to do more portraits.
    i want to finish that purple piece up there so bad.
    going to do it! c:

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    sector six : team astro

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    I just had to pop in and say- WOW!

    I love your pieces, very inspiring- you definitely have your own style in a very good way.

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    @lee_way!
    thank you so much (:
    its easy for me to forget that even i can create art that inspires. .
    more finished pieces, and a few shots of my studies.
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    i like sketching scary men,
    started on paper, finished in ps.
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    i liked this sketch so much it turned into this.
    stilll a wip
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    the sketch was practice in form and anatomy, but the paining i focused more on face. much much more. ahah used plenty of refs.

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    love all this pin up stuff, very cool works.

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    Woah, you've got some nice skills working for you. You obviously have a good foundation that you can keep working on. One thing I do notice is the abundance of the "high contrast" approach. I think that your work could really benefit with a deeper understanding of value and shading and eventually light and color. Your pencil sketch of Morrigan has such lovely complexity and a lot of that is lost in the colored version.

    Anyways, I look forward to seeing more work from you!

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    I'll work my hardest to improve!
    morrigan update!
    thank you metal fingers! i am a worshiper of the female form.
    jjacks thank you also!
    yes, i felt like i left alot out.
    im rancid at creating muscles that still come off as feminine.

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    I'll work my hardest to improve!
    i think maybe, i fixed it or am getting close.

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    I'll work my hardest to improve!
    depressingly enough, this is my firs tcolor study.
    i did some pencil studies, reading loomis books working on facial structure feel like ive learned so much in only a few hours
    going to try to do a color study every day, and also do a loomis exercise.
    welp. here you go, also i have a fan with a blue light under my computer, and that what that reflection is.

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    I'll work my hardest to improve!
    forty five minutes?

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    wow, lots of very nice work in here man!! great stuff!!

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    thank you nicky beats! C:

    heres some more finished things that havent been posted,
    well this is almost there.
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    Hey Spirited! Good stuff you got going on here. I hope you update this more with some recent improvements! I am positive you have and I am still lawding over you being only 18/19.

    I am going to have to add on with what was mentioned earlier - try to get more complimentary colors in it!!! You have the foundations to a pinpoint but expand! I am hoping this isn't coming across as DBaggery but honestly, the best thing for you to do is probably start doing painting in real life, it will increase your speed and efficiency with colors in digital dramatically!

    Also some male anatomy would show that you have depth with understanding the human body (which I bet you can) as opposed to just women which....I don't mind

    Lastly - I love your compositions but some seem like studies with references as opposed to individual concept...I am really keen on seeing what you can do with your own creating, that is, unless you already are doing this.

    Anyways I hope I am not coming across as a jerk with my critique as I am amazed at your ability whilst still being a teenager. Just try chugging out some traditional art like that of your Morrigan but then some. I sadly am the opposite with my sketchbook as I only have speed sketches but I am sure that you are going to wind up on the right path and go far places in the end.

    Can't wait for more! Cheers!

    Striving to be the best that is possible before I conk into the grave.

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    I'll work my hardest to improve!
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    update on pieces posted here, and some newer things.

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    Awesome sketchbook, good job there. Although I'd like to see some of those wips/sketches as finished pieces

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