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    finally..

    i would never think of doing this in the past. Its a colour experiment which i learned alot from....... also thanks alot to Idiot Apathy for his advice.

    I'll do some final touch up, so some comments on how to improve this piece?

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    hmm more midtones?

    all the black is making it look flat. (srry dodnt mean to ryme ..)

    the lighting on the hair is inconsistent with the lighting on the face

    i took a quick sec to show what i meant, im by no means any good but i think if u used less black in these areas the image would be a lot more interesting, maybe a nuetral darker blue to pop out the red?

    justa suggestion hope it helps

    finally..

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    I'd add some cooler tones in the shadows. Maybe some blues or purples. I think it would add a lot more depth and interest. Right now it's looking kinda flat.
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    The glowing eye catches my attention. When I look at it I see a small glowing thing in an otherwise gutted eye cavity. I would assume that it is supposed to be an eye with a glowing pupil, but the shading says otherwise. Perhaps you should leave a dark outline around the pupil and only have the exterior of the eye socket illuminated from the glowing pink-eye of doom...
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