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    cool studies and sketches.. my fav is the 2nd pic from your 1st post. like the colors


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    hey there, another German fellow! may I ask what you are doing now, assuming you finished uni?
    just wanted to pop in and say how I admire your bravery to try compositions and colour, they're looking neat and I absolutely LOVE the utube sketches, brilliant!

    Weiter so!

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    hellow there =)
    You're doing good this those digital sketches. I'm sure they will help you to improve your digital works, especially the way you work with brushes. Try to use some more textured brushes for the environments.
    If you do rendered digital paintings again, try not to use black outlines like you did in many parts of the picture with the girl and the many skulls. It's just because they take away depth from your subjects. Work on your shadowns and highlights more and everything will be ok withour having any lines from the sketch =)

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    Nice sketchbook, I like it.

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    wow your WW2 Zombie is really impressive!

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    Hey Thanks for commenting my sketchbook. Good stuff in here as well!

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    Your sketches are really quite good!
    The knowledge of anatomy is there and all but I think you're struggling with color quite a bit.
    I think you'd be better of just doing b&w paintings right now.
    Value-wise the update May 12th of last year is better than some of your more recent stuff. If you don't have to care about colors you will be able to make much more engaging artwork through values.
    You can always color a b&w later! Being overwhelmed by doing everything at once (lines, value, color) can often be very frustrating and that doesn't help with improvement very much.

    Don't take this the wrong way, you definitely have a good foundation in line and sketching but since value is more important than color IMO you should try to focus on value.

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    Hey man oyu have some nice design ideas in your work, go easy on the lines your sketches though, keep it clean. Working with a pen and focusong on making a nice gestural, accurate mark first go will fix the hesitant marks, this is the kind of thing i mean -http://www.conceptart.org/forums/attachment.php?attachmentid=1438371&stc=1&d=133125 3597

    Keep going man
    Also I think theres a spelling mistake in your first post aha, do you mean "thx* 4" instead of thy?

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    I'm going to reiterate what TFSean said.. Your designs are great but would benefit so much from a smoother and more confident line! Keep it up.

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