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    Concrit please - naga lady.

    Supposed to be a Warcraft naga in an underwater scene, but I'm not entirely sure how to do the underwater-ness, and... composition. Having trouble with composition. I'm not entirely sure where my light source should come from (did it from the left out of habit), where I could use more highlights or darker shadows, etc etc.

    Would appreciate any concrit one may have to offer. On anything, not just composition.


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    You need to work on your anatomy dude the face has no form and it really flat. The angle illustrated on the left hand side staff is wrong too. Read some books and get some reference like I am right now !

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    i see what your problem is here. draw the entire body... then add wings or whatever else this character has. i used to do the same thing, tried drawing the figure entirely without laying down my anatomy. remember, always draw through your figures.

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