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    characters : three samurai

    hi, here are my last creations, inspired by the L5R RPG. C&C are very welcome !







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    The simple rendering works real good, very pleasing for the eye. The second samurai looks like he's been punched in the eye, if he's supposed to have deep set eyes I would suggest making the lower eyelid a little brighter and/or put some darker shadows under the nose since the rest of the face doesn't seem as dark.

    Designwise I think the first character looks real aggressive with his mask but since he has tucked his arms inside his dress it kinda looks like this angry armless guy. Adding arms would make him more aggressive and dangerous look.

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    Looks good. Only thing i see: The blades of the 3 Samurai. It looks as you've forgotten them. And, in my opinion, the handle and the blades doesn't fit together...maybe my fault.

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    Kapturowsky : i modified the eyes of the second character, he looks better like this, you are right I think too that his arms should be more visible, but this is some work ! maybe i 'll do this later

    Mr Kluetsh : well, two of them have their blade at their side, but you made me see that the big samurai 's blade handle is misplaced, i 'll try to make it right.

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    Thumbs up

    Can't go wrong with Samurai, well maybe, but you didnt. Nice work.

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    here are two new characters of the same serie !





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