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    Draw to Survive [Updated May 9th]

    Hi, starting this up again.

    22 Years old, I want a job as a concept artist, illustrator, anything with art really. Crits and suggestions on what to work on are appreciated.
    Last edited by Fantillus; May 9th, 2012 at 11:28 PM. Reason: Ressurecting from the dead
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    Awesome start!--lets see some more. Don't tease us with one image lol
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    hh just one artwork more
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    Amara91 - Thanks, and sorry! I didn't know I could add more than one image per post. I've added two more piece and I'll be adding some sketch work from my books as I scan them. Is there a limit to how many images I should attach to a post?

    inspectorsokar - I've edited the post with two more images for now, more to come soon!

    Thank you for your interest guys, I'm really excited about starting out on this site now.

    Here are some pencil and charcoal sketches. The first is just a facial study - I need a lot of work on human faces/heads. The second is a bust study of an original character of mine from a story I am writing. I used an image from google as a reference for the face. All other elements are mine.

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    I love the illustrative look of the cloud sin the last painting, but the whale dosent look as strong as it could be, the perspective seems alittle, skewed maybe you could make it pop a little more, push the dynamics a little
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    I thought the whale was a submarine at first, haha. My bad.
    Like TheJackal said, you should make it more apparent, maybe make it's tail above the water a little

    Also, I see you like scars, on your characters Anyway, you're off to a great start, keep 'em coming!
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    TheJackal - Thank you for the critique on the cloud/whale piece. The whales were added as an afterthought so I didn't use any reference. If I can find some nice reference for that perspective I'll try to fix it up.

    MrMagic - haha a submarine! Yeah, I can see how the whales are not typically iconic. I don't think I could have the tail fluke and the dorsal fin showing at the same time due to the locomotion method of the whales (if a tail fin is showing, the whale is usually diving, thus the dorsal fin would be obscured by the water). So really what it comes down is one or the other (dorsal fin or tail fluke). I will look up some reference to see if I can make the whales more recognizable. Thank you for the critique! And scars are always cool.

    Here's a few brand new things from me (made last night and this evening). The first piece is digital but for the rest I wanted to work in traditional media a bit since most of my paid work is digital and I needed a break. I noticed how stiff the figure on the first piece came out (and over-rendered, ouch) so I decided to loosen up and do some gesture drawings via posemaniacs. I hope I am doing gesture drawing right - it's something I never did in any of my classes.

    The last piece is a quick self portrait with lighting below and to the viewer's left.

    Also, there's a pegasus in there referenced from the "Draw 50 Horses" book by Lee J. Ames. I tried to combine two poses illustrated in the book. Horses are hard!

    Anyway, crit away please!
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    Damn! Your brush gestures are awesome - consider me inspired! You've also got a sweet knack for faces that I wish I had. I just can't seem to get the hang of the head.
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    karmiclychee - thanks! You should give it a try sometime, the results are interesting. =) As for faces, thank you so much, I've been really trying to improve because I am not very confident with them.

    Here are some more 30 second gesture studies, this time with a crayola watercolor brush pen using http://pixelovely.com/tools/gesture.html for reference. Last image contains a few 5 min charcoal study also using pixelovely.com. Glad I picked up that site from a post in another sketchbook!

    I'll also be giving the loomis books ( http://alexhays.com/loomis/ ) a try tomorrow after work.

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    goood keep up
    i love ur lines in the horse drawing
    and about loomis its the best thing to do
    STUDY STUDY from them
    they are like an art bible
    i wish u luck
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    inspectorsokar - Thank you so much for the encouragment!

    Here's some updates. First are some loomis inspired doodles. Second is a sketch for this week's CHOW. Critique please!
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    i like the pose in ur last chow pease.. tho the weapon suggests movement. or a swinging type of motion.. tho the arm thats holding it.. suggests other wise. my only thoughts about it tbh .. too im a nab in that kind af stuff.

    keep posting.
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    oma - thanks for the critique! I was trying to make the whole pose look dynamic with movement but I can see how the weapon and arm disagree. thanks!

    Since I couldn't finish that chow in time here's a sketch for the next one. Critiques would be awesome! Theme is Steam-punk Aphrodite.
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