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Hello everyone, this is my first post. My goal is to become a freelance illustrator/concept artist, i have been drawing on and off for the past three years.
I am going to upload my sketches and studies here, so feel free to drop in and say hi.
Last edited by Nestoronfire; January 26th, 2011 at 07:16 PM.
Hello, Nestor, welcome to ConceptArt!
Some interesting work so far, certainly. You have not declared any aims so I hope this general advice is of use and not too pedantic.
It looks like you are training a proper sense of detail in terms of shapes - shoulder blades, vertebrae, folds of flesh and veins. However, the proportions are not very comfortable, leading the good details to have a certain lack of cohesion and fall apart. It may do you good to do some heavy pre-drawing, tracing (straight) lines horizontally and vertically to see how things inter-relate. It helps to think of proportions as a separate task - i.e., you can be good at shading but not at proportions and train them separately.
A little note on shading - you have shaded these drawings almost as-if they are marble, perhaps because the highlights are strong and shadows straight. Real flesh has several layers of differing properties and capturing that leads, I believe, to a sense of warmness and physicality.
Keep drawing and I hope to see more!
good start. nice bum detail. lol.
it would be more useful to say a little bit about your background and where you want to go in your first post. then people can help you more.
first advice is to draw the head and legs as well as just the torso.
Thnx for the comments guys.
Jeroen, thank you for the critique. I will be updating pretty often.
Catish, you're right, i'll be updating the first post soon to include more details.
OhgodIloveyouranatomy. I think it would wicked if you posted a surrealist sort of painting with your anatomical details focused on like the torso of a person. Dunno, sorry for spouting out random words.
A few studies i did for a piece and a self portrait i've been working on for a couple of days.
Nice work, especially the colouring. Keep it up
"How'd you like them apples?"
Thank you Dsacc!
This sketch started as a portrait and it turned into a little story about a humanoid private investigator in the future. I had fun doing this cause it's really lose and unrefined. A friend of mine thought he looked like a fish, i'm not really sure what he is so for the time being he shall be known as Fatface....... Detective Fatface.
incredible rendering skills, but be careful, some of your figures and faces come out looking a little stiff and straight, try to loosen up when painting and add some more curvature and rhythm in your poses and faces
looks great though!
keep it up.
get this asap. it might blow your mind.
i feel like you're getting super detail oriented and missing out on the bigger picture. work on figures with movement and be really picky about your anatomy at the start.
good brush skills. keep it up.
I haven't been spending much time doing sketches these days because i want to finish some complete pieces. Also i'm trying to be careful because i have overworked my arm and it feels kinda weird. I spend a lot of time doing stretches and focusing on not tensing up while drawing. I also moved my tablet on my lap and it has helped because i have to move the entire arm to draw and not just the wrist.
This is an illustration of an Orc Berserker.
Nestora polu wraies douleies!!! To rendering sou einai para polu kalo. Pisteuw auto pou prepei na anabathmishs einai h anatomia ta xrwmata kai genika na dwseis perissotero baros sto na kaneis kaluteres zwgrafies(sxedia prin to rendering)
U have great skills so far and i would like to see what u will do if u upgrade your overall drawing and coloring skills. Keep up the good work!!!keep up posting and sharing your progress
Xairomai pou blepw kai allous ellhnes edw
another critique..maybe try using larger sweeps/brushstrokes, and really think about proportion, compare one part (the head maybe) to the rest of the body..
and maybe try to push the hues you use, liven up your pieces a little bit..the colors are a little toned down (unless that's what you're going for)
either way, the berserker looks great, and the piece before that appears to be less stiff..it'll take time to fix that, but atleast you're aware of it.
keep working at it!
KingKostas: Να σαι καλά φίλε, σε ευχαριστώ για την κριτική.
Dope Fiend: I have a tendency of going for more desaturated colors, i think they create the kind of mood i am looking for. It's not a rule though.
Mila: Lol, i actually didn't want him to have a visible neck. I probably should've given him a hump so the lack of neck makes more sense.