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    slence Training Field

    Hi guys, I am new here. I am come from Indonesia.

    I am self tough artist that want to be professional game artist . It's pleasure to start sketchbook here and show my stuff. Please free to give some crit and suggestion coz i still must learn much

    A some work for start
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    Welcome! I'm new here too, and nice stuff you got up there. =] The animations are so cute by the way, ahaha. The only feedback I can really think of is in the first picture, there's no shadow under the person's feet, which kind of makes it look as if he's floating a bit. Or maybe it's just me, but yeah... xD

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    Hi supermarionbros . Thx for comment, oh crap i messed up with attachment.

    Another work, please take a look

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    hey thx for a visit my sketchbook mate

    Try more fight with composition strong silhouette and mass of light is your friend use it

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    oh man~ really great start! hmm.. i'd say since your main focus seems to be on characters, try to study more environments as it seems to be lacking in some of your pieces~ though they are great-- it can become even stronger with more studies in that area. your still lifes are making me hungry... and i just ate! xD

    keep it up though! glad to have you on CA.
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    kojot : Thx for advice and visit mate
    teapo : Thx for visit, i still try to study and get stronger all aspect. Not only environment, I am still lacking about value, proportion and many more things. And very lack about discipline and time management

    Here some environment study with some adjust from imagination

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    Just some mecha concept for fun

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    Wow, I like everything I see, no critiques, just keep it up. Can't wait to see more.
    Check out my sketchbook: Draw or Die

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    The Original [E] : Glad you like it

    Just some work

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    Work for fun and study

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    Update and do starcraft dude
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    Update, still have problem with color
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    King arthur and excalibur
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    Happy Chinese New Year
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    Really Great Sketchbook! Loved it!
    keep up a good work mate!

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    aLDoDarK : Thx . Ayo bikin juga sketchbooknya haha

    Update. For Chow, concept for Pre DW V, my work and many more

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    Damn you have an amazing ability to render some detail!! i can't critique that in any manner, however, i would suggest working on compositions, or setting up more mood in your enviroment, really bring out some action in your characters, just a suggestion

    keep em coming!!
    ...the imperfections make it interesting...

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    dude this is amazing work for a self tough artist ... how did u learn to do all this ? dvds? books ? internet ? or just trial and error ?... and how long have u been drawing ?.. this is so cool stuff.. i love fantasy art...
    i love to do everything and learn everything... i hate to be cornered in one place.. i believe u can be anything u want... Your mind is limitless... check out my sketchbook ... u will find a bit of everything

    http://www.conceptart.org/forums/sho...d.php?t=203429

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    Hi and Wow! Good works man! Your painting techniques are admirable, and plus, you are a self-taught! Wow However I think there's plenty of room for improvements on your anatomy especially about proportion and posing your character. I'm sure you will be better time after time, like the improvements shown in your latest post. Those are rad! So just keep drawing and stack more pages to this sketch thread of yours

    Cheers from Bandung, man!
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    Old sketchbook, in case anyone interested.

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    dope fiend : Thx mate, yes i will try improve it
    rain walker: Thx for visit, i learn from many things. Internet, books, practice, All of it
    witcrack : Thx for visit. Yes improving is a must. I still work for color and value for the most. So sometime i kinda not work to much for gesture and pose. Damang kang? saya jg dari Bandung kok hahaha

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    My work again
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    Wow, really great works!

    I love your weapon designs and the mechas!
    Sketchbook
    Now crit the shit out of me!

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    tawnos : Thx mate

    WIP for ChoW, Aphrodite Steampunk

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    whatup!

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    blackrobin : . Ga bikin sketchbook di CA bro?

    Some of my work, kind of inspired by Star Craft 2

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    Final for Chow Steampunk Aphrodite, didn't finish it on time. And Some concept art

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    YO!!!, wat up dude XD, as usual i totally love your enviro, especially the textures, mind sharing some recipes ;p, as for your characters, i think u should work on your anatomy more, imo

    cheers,

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