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This is a work, i had did in my figure drawingclass; I would like a critique on it.
Last edited by Deepinonespersona; January 10th, 2011 at 02:52 PM.
What do you think?
here you go. they come from my fb page. can't load them through the scanner because it broke.
Here some anatomy of a fruit.
Last edited by Deepinonespersona; January 12th, 2011 at 07:58 PM.
hello! It's good that you're addressing the entire figure, but I think what can help is more structure. Right now the lines seem to float, not really describing solid masses; it may help to make a simple underdrawing--boxes, cylinders, etc.--before putting the contours on top. If you've got a good foundation, the rest will come more easily.
Here a half complete skull study.
nose and eyes practice.
Shade those noses, add either value or color to those irises, get a good highlight going in those pupils. Plus, don't use an outline when defining the eyelids like you've done. Use values. It'll give you a MUCH greater sense of realism.
You do have a good start here though, so keep practicing.
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The usual staples for anatomy:
here another one for you guys.
studies from Sarah Simblet sketch book for the artist.
Probably repeating this, but loosen up your hand when you draw. Try to draw quicker and with longer lines.