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    Drawsgood Illustration Portfolio

    Hey guys and gals, if you have a moment, check out my portfolio and give me any crits you have. Perhaps it's too all-over the place in regards to style/subject matter?

    http://www.drawsgood.com

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    In regards to the concept art images: I think it would be good if you could spend more time on the meticulous details which would draw some more immediate attention from the viewer. There should be a focal point in each image which immediately draws the eye's attention - for example, in the fourth image of the monster attack, I did not immediately notice that the background layer was intended to be monstrous/intimidating. You brought the foreground into focus when the background should have been the focal point, or the centre of attention imo. In this instance I would suggest making the people in the foreground appear much smaller in comparison with the monster, and this way the fog in the background could be retained.

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