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    Unhappy Lady needs help.

    Hey guys,

    I was on a good rush but now I'm stumped...what should I do about her??

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    Last edited by Angelsway257; December 22nd, 2010 at 08:55 PM. Reason: too big
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    For starters, you could render her right arm

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    I would suggest reworking her neck area, it's looking odd. It's not attaching to her body too well.

    I like the head

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    First of all, resize the image, it's way too big.
    Further, proportions are a kinda off. Neck is too long, shoulders are too far from where they should start, and her breasts dimenions are beyond the natural.
    Also, the shadings seem wrong partwise.

    I made a quick overdrawing, though I didn't keep your pose in the end. Not sure if this is the way you wanted to have it go. Anyway hope I could help a little.

    Unhappy Lady needs help.

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    Agree, the head is beautiful.

    I have a beginner question. What kind of brush/technique do you use to get the watercolor like effect? (with different tones lay on top of another) Do you set the opacity to 20% and such?

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    hey

    Yea sorry about it being so big...I don't know how to resize it.

    I realize her proportions are really exaggerated and long so I'll try and redo them. And her BOOBS are GIGANTIC. I will make them smaller. I never like big breasted women anyway. I don't know why I let her stay so porno style so long.

    @Temjin, my brush type is one of the standard in CS3. It changed my own ability to use photoshop. So I hope it helps you too!

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    Swamp Thing - you have really messed up her neck, too. Kudos for the effort, no points for anatomy. Sorry.

    As for what to do - leave it be and go on to the next sketch. No need to get stuck on one sketch, for training it is much better to draw more things than dwell on just one.

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    I can't get the original image to load (probably something to do with its size). All I can see is Swamp things Paintover and I don't know how different it is to the orig.
    Other ppl may be having the same problem so i'd suggest you get it resized if you'd like more comments.

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    I also can't get the original pic to load. If you made this in Photoshop:
    Image>Image size>change the pixel dimensions.

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    yes..sorry about that. Something weird happened when I tried to change the size. Please refer to "witch" the second attempt to show this piece!

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