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    Awesome.

    *edit, I retract my critique because it wasn't accurate. lol

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    Why yiu noupdate?! =)

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    Cause I kinda forgot about CA and I like my tumblr more. I'm kinda lazy but I will try to use this CA more now. I want critiques and such but never got a lot here when I posted so I kinda just drifted away. Needless to say here is some new stuff:


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    I think the biggest thing I need to work on so far is my composition. Not very dynamic at the moment or really up to my standards. Need to think more about the subject matter and get an idea in my head or something. Gonna be doing more studies. Anyone have suggestions for creating compositions? Already know about the rule of thirds and so on so looking for creativity stuff.

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    My, your stuff is so cool, that I don't find much to criticize about. I just love your enviroments, especially the first two in your latest post. I think there are composed very well.
    I have just a suggestion. Perhaps it could be helpful to bring drama in your compositions, if you try out yourself in perspective. Perhaps you could play more with the flats foreground, middle ground, background...?
    By the way, I love your sci-fy stuff, it looks pretty professional (your robots are cool y_y ♥!)

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    New stuff is looking great Sam, for composition I just feel it out tbh, whatever looks good, I usually adjust my values as I go anyway =) Your stuff is looking nice man =)

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    Man you hammered out some strong enviro thumbnails right above,
    and your tumblr blog is too hot to be true. I think it would be time now
    to kick in some more updates here, you can do it and people want to
    see your awesome steps. Keep on doing great things and
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    Thumbnails look amazing!
    Love the colors
    Keep posting

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    Some thumbnails I have been doing recently. I posted them on Crimson Daggers which I'm kinda using a bit more. I'll be posting a here more again as well. I tend to get lazy with showing my work. Ummm, these thumbnails will probably not get finished, I got some fairly good critique from the CD forum and I think I need to focus more on a specific type of Goblin. The idea is that the design would look like they travel in a pack or something. I'm going to be 3d modelling the chosen design and such so I only have the time for one kind of goblin. Hoping my next set will be much better.

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    Hey there. I haven't commented in a while (maybe it was in an older thread of yours?) But it seems like you've improved a lot in your understanding of structure and light quite a bit. Keep going.

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    p sage: I'm unsure if you did in my old sketchbook. You may have but hey, I'm too lazy to check. Thanks for dropping by!

    - Was going through my pages on this sketchbook and I think I'm seeing some improvement! Hurrah!

    Anyway, these are some goblins with more of a theme. The middle one is kinda interesting but I can't use him due to all of the twigs so I didn't render him as much as the others. - Gonna be 3d printing the model after I am done. I think 3 has some potential.

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    And here is a rendered version of one of them. I gave him a mohawk. Cause why not.

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    Hey hey hey My57!! wassup buddy! Been an AGE dude How are things?

    Wow - you're rocking the art... check out those enviro skills!

    But I also have a request - Mahran and I have started doing the superhero challenges again and only Ashess has joined in so far - our 1st challenge has just ended but we haven't got to putting up the poll yet so if you want to submit something that would rock! I have been SUPER busy so gutted not to have done something more epic myself but hey!

    High five for the awesome progress!! See you around dude!

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    You're an unlucky person to contact me when I'm so busy - I'll be sure to reply to your thread.

    Anyway, here is a little face thing I did for fun in order to relax. Too much work to do so had to do something pointless. - The chin bothers me now that I look at it. Too flat. Bleh. Can't be happy with anything I make :/

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    The facefun painting is looking fun, but I think that you still should
    keep on some basic human head proportions even if it’s an alien head.
    I think that the extremely triangle shape head is not selling, and his
    hat/headgear is not really happily put on his head. His forehead
    would require some shadows casted from the helmet, and his neck
    doesn’t seem like a 3D rounded shape, cause of lack of shadows.
    The chin should cast some kind of shadow on the neck, and if
    you decide for the bottom lighting, then the nose would be lit
    from below. Those are just my thoughts and opinion of course,
    try to take it with care, I may be wrong in some aspects.
    The last environment is pretty cool, futuristic and all that,
    but the closest pyramid (it seems like a glass pyramid), it
    ain’t look like the sky rail is hitting it on the center. And now
    that I look closer, the sky rail ain’t hitting the same way the
    pyramids. For example that most far away one, is connected
    right around the middle with the rail, but this second, the pyramid
    in the middle is connected with it right on the rim. Is that intentional,
    or an accident? Anyway keep up with the good things and don’t stop
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    You can ignore my alien face thing XD I literally was just fooling around with shapes - no excuse though, I should try a little harder next time I do something silly xD

    The Rail doesn't hit centre actually, the pyramids were 3d models that were painted over and such so everything on them is meant to be - Not completely happy with the overall painting anymore to be fairly honest, I think the composition and angle could have been better. I need to still work on my compositional skills. Can never get enough practice in it in my opinion. If they were better than there would probably be less confusion about how the rail thing connects.

    I should update more here. So here is a 3d sculpt I have done. I'm fairly happy with it.

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    fun sketchbook! Keep it up!

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    Thanks for dropping by!

    - Just some more sculpting stuffffff and a reworked the text on my crocodile guy, didn't really like it how the text looked in the old one.

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    You've really improved a lot. those enviroments are kick-ass!!

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