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    I was going to put this in the finished section, but...

    ...out of modesty and my newb-ness here decided I would put it in the WIP section for crits. Technically it is finished because it has been sent off to print... but I would LOVE some crits for the next round anyway.

    Let me know what you think!

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    looks pro! simple kind of professional tho, im pretty sure it must have been what you were intending.

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    I'd of liked to see a bit more of a 'glassy' look to the water's surface. Also it looks like you forgot to clean up the highlight 'overspray' on some of the aliens hands.

    Other than that it's nice enough.

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    All the hands seem a little bit awkward, whether in terms of human or cartoon anatomy. So I recommend studying hands. I think especially if you're working in cartoons, hands are a pretty critical aspect for conveying feeling/intent/etc.

    I think the poses could have been a little more thought out. That cartoon effect - where you're standing and then your legs start spinning and your body follows afterwards - works for the little guy since he's being chased, but it looks strange for the lead chaser guy. Why is the little guy doing zombie hands? Is that just cartoon effect? If so, I think leaning facing forward and palms forward would have looked better.
    And then for the second chaser guy, his arms are out of running synch with his legs, so that looks awkward.

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    i didnt realize the bottom was water until i saw the comment down there, you could deffinitely add some ripples and sparkle to it, right now it just looks like a cutaway of the ground

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