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    Red face Superman/Power Girl pages

    Ive just finished these new pages to start showing editors and publishers, (crap I just realized I dont have any of their emails ) let me know what you guys think? Strengths, weakness, what I should focus more on improving, and so on.

    thanks for your help guys.

    Superman/Power Girl pages

    Superman/Power Girl pages

    Superman/Power Girl pages

    Superman/Power Girl pages

    Superman/Power Girl pages

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    These look good. If I had one large critique, it would be with the line quality--the disparity between "thick" and "thin" lines sort of sticks out here. If it were me, I'd keep the line thickness a bit more constant until you get more of a sense what you're doing.

    You might get better and more detailed feedback if you post individual pages in the "Critique Center" section.

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    To me, superman does not look iconic/heroic as he does in other comic books, cartoons. His emotions look like he's unsure of himself and his abilities as a super hero.

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