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    Another animation project


    Primal War 8 Flash Animation by ~PrimalWar on deviantART

    Another part of a series I've been working on . Kind of did a redux to it,Hope you enjoy


    Primal War 9 Flash Animation by ~PrimalWar on deviantART

    I added more character to the enviroment around the characters to make a more darker world and the music by Jonn Jabb

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    Your link did not work over at DeviantArt. I suggest posting them on YouTube. I think my MAC needs a special plug-in to view it. Love the work I've seen from you. I'm very anxious for an update as there are not many animators who don't use the cartoon approach.

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    Good use of environmental parallax and overall it's great to see people making web animations of this length - my hat's off to you for putting the effort in

    The critiques I have are regarding secondary motion on characters, most noticeable when the characters are blowing their horns and drawing their bows - their torsos are perfectly immobile, which gave an unnatural impression

    also, i recommend a closer observance to the 180-degree rule unless you have a purpose to break the plane (this is from when he throws the fruit and it changes direction between shots).

    Also I recommend recording your own sounds - at this point (you're on the 9th installment of a series i believe) it's time to distance yourself from canned sound bits - When including sound, make sure it synchs up PERFECTLY or else it's actually detracting from the animation.

    And, due to the final image of the animation (of 8) where both breasts are visible from the side view, as always: Draw Draw Draw (from life)!

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    Thanks for the critiques , they always help when I work on another project . Thanks alot

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    Finally saw the first one. Episode 8. I like the character designs a lot but the animation need work. Also your layout skills are up there. Very colorful backgrounds and a variety of environments. On the other hand I think I'd be more interested in seeing the cast in a animated feline pinup gallery. Nice work! Had to sign in to Deviant to watch but still can't see Episode 9.

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    @Cout: You may want to watch ep. 9 on Newgrounds if it isn't working on DA.

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    The link didn't work for me as well. Just keep on loading but not happen. If you mind can you provide youtube link too. Thanks!

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