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November 24th, 2010 #1
"Pool Shark" Illustration ~ (Crits Apreciated Greatly)
This is for an illustration project I am working on, depicting the animal pun "pool shark".
Crits and comments are very much appreciated. Thanks for your help
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November 27th, 2010 #3
Thanks Venger! heres an update. Havent added the splash, bounce light or transparency of the water and inflatable stuff. Still needs lots of work.
November 27th, 2010 #4
November 28th, 2010 #5
need help with splash
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Just an idea for some sarcasm, why don't you put a shark fin on the back of the snorkling kid, like those you always see in films, when people run out fo the water screaming because of a brat's joke.
I think the splash looks better, if you don't make neat and forms of the splashes but more like thousands of water drops, also add a bit white too, right now it more looks like viscous slime or something.
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November 28th, 2010 #7
I think the pool would look more comprehensible if it was smaller... I would cut it off at the edges, especially on the left side so the viewer can see where it ends. It's way funnier if the shark appears out of a small pool than a huge one.
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