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    I like it!
    Shark jaws distend when they bite, use some ref.
    You might want to alter the angle of the shark a bit, so it's not so straight.

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    Thanks Venger! heres an update. Havent added the splash, bounce light or transparency of the water and inflatable stuff. Still needs lots of work.

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    update

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    need help with splash

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    Just an idea for some sarcasm, why don't you put a shark fin on the back of the snorkling kid, like those you always see in films, when people run out fo the water screaming because of a brat's joke.

    I think the splash looks better, if you don't make neat and forms of the splashes but more like thousands of water drops, also add a bit white too, right now it more looks like viscous slime or something.

    http://middlezonemusings.com/wp-cont...big-splash.jpg
    http://imagecache6.allposters.com/LR...7/F4DO000Z.jpg

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    Cow

    I think the pool would look more comprehensible if it was smaller... I would cut it off at the edges, especially on the left side so the viewer can see where it ends. It's way funnier if the shark appears out of a small pool than a huge one.

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