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    @devastacio: yea you are right .. don't worry I'll keep on it ..
    I thought of painting it but I said to myself I 'd better continue practicing.. I will paint it the next time I take a break from ""the small steps""
    thanks devastacio for dropping by and btw I enjoy watching your progress in ur sketch book, keep up

    @shiNIN: glad that you like it ..
    yea I agree about that .. you must try it ... the funny stuff makes it a lot easier to continue practicing

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    Damn!! :| :|I forgot to draw the eyebrow !! .... did anyone made this mistake before ?? XD XD

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    PRETTY shiny hair. Well the right part is messy, I mean, she must a messy unever hair length

    Two light sources... Someone is brave but it's nice to have two I admit. I think you omit a few highlights for the secondary one. At least the hair should be affected (if the hair blocked any light that would reach her left eye).
    Be warned, I'm not very good with lights but I try to say right things.
    Her left iris is glowing and I feel the right eyeball a tiny bit too bright as well...
    Her face and gesture is very unconfortable looking... I don't know if you wished to express something.
    Her hair looks like she was in water I guess.. hair blowing looks like different but it's just my guess.
    I'm so uncertain... or not?

    But the hair shine and color is fabulous... It's hard to look at anything else

    The face is kinda okay. Well not the lighting, you don't know enough of the planes of the face yet.
    I think well done considering your level (no harm intended I can't say it's awesome but it's no problem, one should be a near pro and lucky to make me say that, regarding the drawing quality I mean I can be happy with a badly drawn but funny lively stuff).
    Keep it up

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    lol. I didn't think about her hair length .. it's looks so funny now
    yea, you are so right about the lights and I like your analysis ..
    except the eyes I actually wanted it to look a little bit glowing .. like the eyes of the cats .. I wanted her a little bit weird
    about the hair, either this day was stormy ,or she uses a good hair-gel .. I don't know why I liked it this way
    don't worry I didn't feel any offense. I actually wanted more
    thank you very much for your comments and your time .. it really helps me a lot

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    Quote Originally Posted by SadMonster View Post
    except the eyes I actually wanted it to look a little bit glowing .. like the eyes of the cats .. I wanted her a little bit weird
    that's fine then I forgot to mention the "if it was intended, that's fine" stuff critics often say in Critique Center, it's so troublesome anyway

    I actually wanted more
    Don't tempt me
    Well I don't want to overload beginners - and I need time to draw and to do other things as well, I don't think writing a lot about one piece would be useful for most of the time

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    Talking

    ok here's another piece , actually it's the original piece but the face wasn't so obvious so I decided to isolate the face and hair ...
    this one was actually a nude painting, and what you can see now is the censored version

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    have nothing to say .. I felt so bad for all what's happening in my country now and this is all what I thought of

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    Hey Mr Monster

    Good to see you, how are things going for you in your part of the world?

    Really glad to see you posting.

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    @Star Eater: thank you very much for asking I'm so glad you care .
    regardless some depression, I'm fine. about my country I can't tell, I'm so worried about the next months, and so confused. all what I wish now is some stability for a while, so that we can enjoy a new and peaceful life.
    and I pray for libyia each day. I can't think of any happy ending for what's happening in libyia now .. god be with them
    about all revolutions in other countries til now I didn't hear about any violence and this is good I hope it stays this way and achieve their goals peacefully.

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    Yeah, I can relate somewhat to living in political and social uncertainty, but nothing to the extent of what you are going through. Hang in there and stay safe. If it's any comfort, don't feel too alone in your speculation, the whole world is watching Egypt and hoping for the best for its people.

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    your words make me a little bit optimistic , thank you my friend

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    I thought about you since you posted that pic but I totally had any even slightly clever or comforting words to say, being lost in my own chaotic one-person world, with tiny petty own little troubles
    In my life there was only a pretty peaceful revolution in this country, I can just imagine the hardship of people on the various parts of Earth...
    Best wishes for you...

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    I understand, even me didn't have any thing to say. maybe I still have nothing to say .. I 'm so confused .. God only knows where we are going to.
    thank you for your wishes shiNIN It means a lot to me.

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    I understand, even me didn't have any thing to say. maybe I still have nothing to say .. I 'm so confused .. God only knows where we are going to.
    thank you for your wishes shiNIN It means a lot to me.

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    apparently I did misunderstood the meaning of a sketchbook thread .. so starting from the next post I will use it the right way

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    I don't think there's anything wrong with your sketchbook. It's your own. Fill it up with your own creations! A lot of people use it to post their practices and studies, that's fine too. Your choice.

    But I am now curious to see what you have planned...

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    long time no see

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    I'm back after learning a little bit more about anatomy

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    some more figure stuff

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    head back foot hand

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    brace yourself!! .. I'm back

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    Wink

    Hey, Don't worry. Your not alone, I'm a beginner too. I'm only 13 years old. I really do like your drawing. It sorta tells about you. I'll keep checking on this thread. Also any advice/tips would be useful. Thanks

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    You should use the smaller brushes a lot less and rely on bigger brushstrokes to bring bigger forms out because when you use the smaller brushes for that it looks scribbly. Also the brush strokes should go along and across the forms. Sometimes you put them all over the place.

    I would also suggest that you start pushing some studies that apply to the work you're doing. Do a study that applies to the personal piece you're doing. Anatomy and such applies to everything so you should do them every day.

    Keep it up, don't give up.

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    I like it.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Maddy33100 View Post
    Hey, Don't worry. Your not alone, I'm a beginner too. I'm only 13 years old. I really do like your drawing. It sorta tells about you. I'll keep checking on this thread. Also any advice/tips would be useful. Thanks
    Thanks Maddy for your nice words and it's nice to know you

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    Quote Originally Posted by ConnyNordlund View Post
    You should use the smaller brushes a lot less and rely on bigger brushstrokes to bring bigger forms out because when you use the smaller brushes for that it looks scribbly. Also the brush strokes should go along and across the forms. Sometimes you put them all over the place.

    I would also suggest that you start pushing some studies that apply to the work you're doing. Do a study that applies to the personal piece you're doing. Anatomy and such applies to everything so you should do them every day.

    Keep it up, don't give up.
    well that's a great advice thanks a lot for you help unfortunately I just saw it now

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    Quote Originally Posted by SadMonster View Post
    Damn!! :| :|I forgot to draw the eyebrow !! .... did anyone made this mistake before ?? XD XD
    Yes, me too! xD

    Your drawings and ideas are great

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    here's a new one kinda crappy but I did put my feelings in it

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    Quote Originally Posted by Karpav0li View Post
    Yes, me too! xD

    Your drawings and ideas are great
    LOL it's nice to know that I'm not a lone
    thanks Karpav0li

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