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Thread: Prospass's Sketchbook
November 13th, 2010 #1
I've finally decided to start my sketchbook here. I really need some hard critics to improve and keep getting better
So here is some old stuff:
1h speed paintings:
Thanks for stopping by =)
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November 13th, 2010 #2
very nice works.Your colors and line are very strong. I want to see more
November 13th, 2010 #3
November 13th, 2010 #4
I love your rendering style =) usage of color is really nice and I like your composition on the girl and beast one, there is one thing though, I think oh the clock one for the speedpaintings the sky is too dark, not sure it should be that dark especially with sunlight like that I hope that helps =)
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November 13th, 2010 #5
very nice stuff really! Looking at your first 4 drawing I would say, you could improve a bit more in composition and flow to make a picture more interesting. Somehow the eye tends to loose its way more out of the picture when looking it and. Like in the second picture it gets drawn into the left down corner, and you could use the mountain the background to actually guid the eye to the center piece again. Right now they look more like "I just need to place some background mountain".
Nearly same problem got the 3t picture. The eyes can run around guidless and the focus tends to shift to the right where the brightest part ist. No real guid back to the main point of the picture, which I guess should be the left with the guy and mountain, Ice?
Anyway hope to see more from you! It's really nice so far =)
November 13th, 2010 #6
Digging the work and looking forward to more!
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December 4th, 2010 #11
Really nice renderings mate and movie study looks great. Keep up the good work and keep posting. Definitely wanna see more
December 4th, 2010 #12
your environments are awesome! i agree that you could work some more on composition etc, but you show so much confidence and style that I didn't even really pick up on that at first
Your characters for some reason don't show that same confidence, and the really finished ones have such hard, precise detail all over that it's difficult to know where to look. not that they're bad, just your envs have much more confidence and work a lot better as complete images
December 4th, 2010 #13