Hey I'm new to conceptart.org, and don't really know how to go about this so I'll just wing it. This is a school project, I was tasked with copying a Bargue drawing to the best of my abilities. I'm in the later stages and I'm looking for ways to improve the project. I sort of want artist and people with fresher eyes than mine to point out mistakes or improvements that can be made. I'm sure I missed some. I included the original copy for reference.
Sorry for the crappy photo. My scanner ain't working at the moment, so again sorry.