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start-scetch inspired by schuberts string quartett - done in mypaint. critique is welcome! thanx
Last edited by RenéK; November 6th, 2010 at 06:20 AM. Reason: upload problems
@Raoul Duke- Are you sire you've not mistaken her breast as a head? From what I see, her head is the darker shape above the shoulders.
Saw your post, and could only see the problems if I made out the breast as her head.
I think it's good, but def lacks some details and defined 'form'.
Haha, even if I try, I can't imagine her breast being her head. I guess it goes to show how differently people can perceive art.
Now that I stare into it, I can't make out a head any more. I would really like to see an update to this piece.
tried to lower values...shapes still not in the right places...
and yes the dark spot is meant to be the head, a knot of hair.
allot of work to do
thanx for your comments
Looking a lot better, but now the woman's body looks really distorted. There is really something crazy with her right shoulder... and it's causing a lot of problems for the rest of her body. I also noticed the posing of both characters seems a little off. There isn't much sense of weight, especially the way she's being held. I wasn't sure if it was because that was on purpose (spirits are weightless).
Keep up the good work.
found time to work on it...
hope to fix all reminding issues at the next step, especially the head and the death's cloak, and turn it to a final. some greys will be added to give the pic more color.
@muddus: weigthless spirits are a good excuse for my bad composition
The girl looks better in the previous drawing