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    Very Impressive!

    Hi! I love the tree on the hill. I am a long time artist and I came here to learn about computer art. The sketch you did of the tree is the kind of look I like for a future project.
    Keep up the good work. I will be checking back to see what you are doing. I hope to learn from your impressive work!
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    Spiralpen, tenaciousartist, thank you very much for the support!

    I haven't done much studies in a while, so I thought I'd do a quick portrait speedpaint from reference (my own).
    C&C would be appreciated.
    Last edited by Nelka; April 18th, 2011 at 11:45 PM.

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    Very nice work! Like your own note!

    Greetings Kaffeetrinken

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    I am a great fan of beards and I am founding member of the "beards are manly, and men must be manly" movement!
    - So I would absolutely love to see your bear worked out more
    I see this is a speedpaint, but in the end you paid a lot of attention to detail on the nose and eyes. I am not quite sure about the position of the left eye; it seems to high. But I might be mistaken being a beginner myself.

    I really like your sb anyway

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    Here's some quick uploads. Been busy, so didn't really get to do much of the actual study stuff. Another painting practice (okay, I'm gonna try variate a bit more), and some life drawing. The last sketch was just me messing about while bored somewhere, and I remembered the CHOW topic.

    I think my next study is gonna be lips. Lots of them. And better colouring. At least I feel kinda more to grips with general painting - stuck to a single layer on that first one.

    Expect more improvement CA, and please crit harshly if there isn't enough

    Kaffeetrinken: Thank you!
    LordLouis: I will definitely render the daylight out of that pic then. Seems I should complete the exercise, and I generally give up on a picture too quickly. Thank you!

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    to me it looks like you were on the right track! study is the key. totally. if you find any weakness in your work, study the hell out of that subject! keep it up, lady!

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    Jatherip: So awesome of you to stop by! Thank you, I'll keep at it

    Just thought I'd update with a WIP. Yes, still a portrait, but I'm attempting to work from photo reference again, since the self portraits were all from a mirror. Also, trying something new with colour.
    Some help would be appreciated. I've noticed the photo sort of distorted the head shape when I started trying to paint it, so I'll be fixing that. The original photo had some strong light, so I'm kind of winging the shading. Figured it would be boring to have the face in the harsh light with the painting.

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    Like I said, I suck at painting mouths. So I figured I'd do a couple of sketches. I realised painting them is very different from sketching/drawing. Much easier to do the latter for me. My lips are pretty thin, which made it more difficult, but I at least now know where I can exaggerate features and stuff.
    So yeah, some quick speedpaints.

    If anyone checks in here, I'd love to know if there is any improvement pretty please :3

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    As promised to LordLouis, I thought I'd work on the portrait some more.
    Still keeping it as a sketch though, but I think some things are fixed.

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    I feel like I'm spamming repeats here, but I figured more progress warrants an update. Sort of have the Caroline portrait done, but not going into the hectic after-details until after I throw it to the wolves in the Crit centre.
    But yeah, failing any crits there, if anyone stops by here, please drop a message!

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    Hi, your portraits are quite nice,
    here are my crits for the last one,sorry if i'm being harsh but crits are never funny.
    for the last one a small highlight on the nose could be nice, the right eye feels out of place to me(it's very well renderd btw) or maybe it's the eyebrow that needs some value variation in hue.
    Moreover as your background is green, it means there is a lightsource that makes the light bump on this green and so the green sould reflect it's own color into the character, you could put some greenish dark tones in the shadowy parts of the character.
    One more thing the neck part of this pretty girl needs to be fixed.
    That's all for now, sorry for the harsh tone, some of my crits might be wrong as well i'm not an expert at all, you ve got some good skills and your portraits are coming out better and better, keep up the good work.

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    Feil Magnus: Thanks for the crit. The other thread was pretty quiet, but I tried to follow some of your advice.

    Anyway, I'm done with this one for now. Thanks to the awesome CA crits, I think it's a bit of an improvement. YAY no more alien eyes!!! Though I pretty much scrapped using the reference now...
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    Hello, nice stuff so far. Keep up those figure you're studies. You're definitely improving.

    My crtique on your portrait (although I know you are finished, but you can apply this to the next one) it that the bone structure around the eyes doesn't seem very well defined. Also the left side of her lips is bigger at the top than the on the right. The red area should actually appear shorter on the left side than on the right..I'm not sure if I am explaining that very well.

    Also you may want to consider checking out Loomis' drawing the head and hands (it's a pdf) if you haven't already. There are some nifty instructions about constructing the head that I hadn't thought of before. Like instead of starting with an oval, you start with a sphere then ad the chin. Anyway, you may know that already but if you haven't checked it out, definitely do so.

    Keep up the good work!
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    Thanks for stopping by my sketchbook.
    Just had a look around, sadly my novice eyes can't see anything to really crit on. My favourite is the portrait of the guy with the beard, looks like he has a good strong gaze on the go.

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    Wooden Mango: Thank you for the crit. I agree with you on that part. I've done studies from loomis before, but I kinda tried to do a mass-drawing/blob thing for my construction since there was reference, and that was my downfall. I must say, after all the advice I've gotten post-mortem on the pic, I'm definitely going to avoid those noob mistakes I inevitably ended up doing. I guess it's time to open those books up again and do a refresher.

    Kode:
    Thanks for checking mine out too. I think out of all my portrait studies that one was the only successful one.

    It's been almost a month since my last update. I feel pretty lame about that. Maybe I should get an SSG to get me going more. It's not really all that great trying to work on all this stuff in near-isolation, artistically speaking.

    Anyway, this is a quick sketch I did. It's basically just a "concept thumbnail" for class, so I'm not exactly excited about it. But it's something. Excuse the pose, anatomy, painting, colouring, etc. I didn't use any reference for it and I just sort of constructed it on a couple of layers. Deadline is next week friday, so there will definitely be an update in the same vein within the next week. Just you know, not crappy. D:

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