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    need help with some sketches

    Hi there iam new in this Forum ^^,
    Let me intriduce myself, iam Gali, an argentinian student of graphic design, 22 years old girl.
    so.. iam doing a work for the university and with the "energy" concept i have to do a few pieces (posters, products, etc) and i really dont know how to draw >.< i follow some books from Christopher Hart and Andrew Loomis but i cant draw nothing . I just need sketches, they are 13 sketch what i need. I have the "poses" that i wanted to draw, so... can anybody help me with this? iam since three days drawing and i know you guys can di this very quick

    Thanks ^^

    some reference of what iam looking for :
    need help with some sketches

    need help with some sketches

    need help with some sketches

    need help with some sketches

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    it looks pretty good. The drawings at the top could have a bit more feel and flow. I would suggest getting a bit more confident in your strokes. The linework looks a bit too tight and controlled. It's kinda holding back the rhythm of your figures. The consistent line weight is contributing to the forms looking very short and without flow. Try to think of your lines or pencil like a race car. Fast along the straightaways and slow and skidding/ thick lines along the curves. This might help to bring your nice drawings to great drawings with feeling and motion.

    Hope this helps.

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    A) This is in the wrong section for now...This area is for graphic design, not gesture sketches.

    B) Are you asking for someone to do your work for you?

    C) I'm already assuming the sketches above aren't hers anyway since that's not her name, though she did credit.

    Please PM me if you'd like an individual crit.

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