Did a bit more work on this, still a long way to go... Think I might have the change the scale of the "figure" in the foreground (that blue squiggly thing)
The stairs on the right in front are a little too dark. They blend in with the collums in front.
I liked the stylized figure in front from the picture before better. That one look really good in combination with the lighting around it, very sculptural. I would go back that one step.
Maybe the perspective/horizon line is tilted a little too much. A little more settle would do good i think.
This is my first try at an EOW.
Here is my WIP:
I like what you did to create atmosphere, although I think you blurred out too much of the foreground (the hanging rocks). For me atleast, it is very distracting.
Also, with some of the shadows on the clothing, it almost looks like there is a second lightsource coming from behind the people, esp. in the foreground. It looks like that due to ther clothing being lighter in color opposed to the people on the opposite side of the fire.